| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaioh Miyu On: June 26, 2003 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^
WOW this is too good, I think its the best story on the net... and don't be shy about Bondage love, that chapter was the best.
You will fined that every relationship has bondage when you live by the kiss and tell rule.
I remember when I was 18 and working in a clothing store when we would close we all spent time gossiping about our sex lives and got a lot of good tips from each other, lol we even had one gay guy working with us and learned all about his sex life too. Lol
what I'm getting at is this is a great lemon, great great, but BULMA can't leave!!! if she does she will
regret it later. And Vageta is a man and there are a few things a man cannot live with out
1:) they like to have their dicks sucked, and they like to come on girls all over, its gross, but true. If Vageta really had no respect for Bulma weather she liked it or not it would of been done, if he respects his woman, he may not do it if she asked him,
and second they like it in the ass, or just Doggy style. I have never met a man that has said differently, and you would never see a Hentai Anime missing these, as I'm sure they are written by men.
This Lemon is missing these. You seem like a woman full of Fantasy's, but remember that man have them too, and they can get pretty bad too.
OKAY peace out |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 25, 2003 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
allright times up its bin a week or at least seance i last read it so get that chapter up |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 25, 2003 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey come on hurry up with the next chapter o and do you ever read these? if you do can you say somthing about them becuse im getting tierd of writing when no ones listening |
Reviewed By: mercy templar On: June 24, 2003 19:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS HURRY AND WRITE MORE |
Reviewed By: sway ace On: June 24, 2003 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic so much to me it is very original and different please keep this going and hurry on adding the next chapters
*_*SWAY |
Reviewed By: Miyu On: June 24, 2003 06:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry I need to change my ratings, I'm a teacher so I don't usually give 10 out of 10s because nothing is perfect, but I changed my mined ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Miyu On: June 24, 2003 06:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! I HATE WAITING... but on the same hand, I was thinking I DON'T WANT THIS TO EVER END ^_^ I have read ALOT of lemons, can't write them but I ENJOY THEM! and this one was GREAT, a GREAT mix of Bondage abuse, lust and a bit of love.. oh oh and a plot!! oh and MORE BONDAGE PLEASE, chapter 19 was my fav
ohh yeahh!! I'm not even a Dragon ball Z fan, but you have me woundering about it.
I think the best part was it was SO realistic, I found a lot of the conversations that Vegeta and bulma had were real conversations that I have expressed to my *cough* lover. So I'm relating to the story at every end. This is only expressed from you imagination WOW. Can you e-mail me and tell me when the next chapter is out!!! I can't e-mail you, my computer don't let me.
my e-mail is Miyu_kaioh@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: d_whitesilver On: June 23, 2003 13:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wooohh, cliffhanger! Don'tcha just love those? I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep updating! :D |
Reviewed By: Only4YoO On: June 23, 2003 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally you updated thank-you!! Your other fanfics are great but I say 'Slave' is the best! Keep working on 'Slave'!!! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: June 23, 2003 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sigh* YOU'RE a FANTASTIC writer! Gee, I love this fic, It's not sick and neither are you!
Your FICS ROCK! I don't really care about typo's and- update soon, but don't stop your life for it!!! Actually, the bondage isn't that bad...really, I've read worse. ^_^ He only used that whip 3 times... Try having Goku spank Chichi(hard) *shudder* 30 times while trying to hold her down. (Humph,I gotta post that fic!!) |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 22, 2003 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hurry with the next chapter im growing old here jk but come on im going nutts |
Reviewed By: Betty Boop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thamks for update! The chapie was stellar! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 22, 2003 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, as always. Keep up the good work and update soon, okay? Sorry about bitching you out...heh heh...impatients got to me. I understand about getting stressed out woth terms and all. Finals suck. Please update soon though. So, what are your other fics about? Bulma may be a genius, but she seems nieve at times. It's all great though, update soon and keep up the good work.
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 01:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
UGH! I hate cliffys'...well im glad that you are able to post more often now, the wait for chapter 23 was killing me!
Update Soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Legana On: June 21, 2003 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!
WONDERFUL THAT YOU UPDATED! CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!
BTW, did you win the contest you emailed us about to vote for your fic?
Hope so!
Kisses, Legana. |
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