| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukelover02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story so far! what does frieza want with bulma? update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: little dutchy On: July 17, 2003 19:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
there is just one more thing i have to say...*ahum*
keep writing like this hon, and you will be soooo rich it hurts!!!!
just like the fact that i'm just so obsessed with banana's it hurts too!! I EVEN DREAM ABOUT THOSE SON OF A B*TCHES!!!!
I'm kinda tired but it's only 3.30 o' clock in the morning O.o
maybe your fic is keeping me awake??? WHAT THE HELL AM I SAYING OFCOURSE THIS FIC KEEPS ME AWAKE X@
well...I better stop here before I'm going even crazier...o.o
BYE BYE AGAIN:D do you want some flowers??? better grab a vase first then!!!!! ---> (F)(F)(F)(F)(F)(F)(F)(F)(F)(F)
greez from inny the banana queen |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: July 17, 2003 19:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Listen to me babe...we all want that next chapter...so...give us what we deserve!! =P
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Reviewed By: Jade On: July 17, 2003 19:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS SOOOOOO COOL!!! UPDATE NOW OR I WILL TICKLE YOU WITH A FEATHER FOR ETERNITY BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHHHHHHHAHHHAHAHAHHHH...'uche uche'
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Reviewed By: jesse On: July 17, 2003 19:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! this fic is the best
hurry up and update I want to see more! |
Reviewed By: little dutchy On: July 17, 2003 19:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE I BEG YOU PLEASE UPDATE I'M ON MY KNEES NOW...PLEASE!! I WILLE PRAY EVERYDAY THAT THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL COME OUT!! PLEASE PLEASE...
I hope that makes things clear..=D
Could you please send me the drawing of bulma in her slave constume...mm.org was being a bastard again so i couldn't see them *cries her eyes out*
anyways...I dreamed of banana's again..:D:D ...not like it's interesting or anything but I just wanted to tell somebody!!!!
welllllll...about your fic...I'm sure you have heard the following things from every kind reviewer... :
THIS FIC IS AMAZING!! finally someone who isn't scared to shock the world...! I LIKE IT SOOOOOOO MUCH I WOULD DIEEEE FOR A NEW CHAPTER...!!!
very nice written...much into detail but in a not-boring-kinda-way so that's another positive thing to add...the story line is very surprising and I would love to see an ilandra/bulma lemon in it somewhere ;P
well...what could I say more..??? you know that you are one of the best writers on ff.net and mm.org that's so obvious I could cry banana's...!
well enough of this before I'm getting too jealous..!!!!!
PLEASEEEEEE update soon!! and mail me the drawings if you have time...this fic gives me lots of inspration...I think I'm going to draw a picture of this fic...=)
{mail adres is little_inny@hotmail.com}
BYE BYEEEEEEE!!!!!!! thank for giving me so much reading pleasure or how the hell it is called in american... ^_^
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Reviewed By: ~*Devil-Vegeta*~ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eey wich song did you used by this chapter?? it was great...jut like this chapter..you really are fantastic!!kizzz
Rinske |
Reviewed By: ~*Devil-Vegeta*~ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 15:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
eey wich song did you used by this chapter?? it was great...jut like this chapter..you really are fantastic!!kizzz
Rinske |
Reviewed By: Betty Boop [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was cute how ilandra kissed bulma. This was a grusome chapter but one of the best chapters! |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: July 09, 2003 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything is Nothing. Great song. And even true in a sense. Hmmm...yep. Well, good chapter. Keep it up, and update soon -k-? Arigatou.
Koaitan Princess
note: Shut the hell up Jack.....baka. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: July 09, 2003 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Damn Jack. Stupid Bakayaro! Grrrrrrrrrr! That's just plain annoying! Well, like I said great chap. And I was somewhat supprised with the Illandrea/Bulma kiss, but yet, I was expecting it. Update SOON, okay?
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: July 09, 2003 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Hmmm...I was kind of shocked to Illandrea kissed Bulma, but yet i was kind of expecting it. I'm downloading thet song right now. Keep up the good work, and update SOON.
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: SaberWolf On: July 08, 2003 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really been enjoying this fic. I remember reading the first few chapters on ff.net when you first started it. But, I think I forgot about it until I was checking up on your profile and discovered that you had continued it here at mediaminer. I love your originality in regards to this story. You have a great talent for writing, especially in the action scenes. Although I must say that I've discovered through the "Bondage" chapter that I'm not really into hardcore bondage. I'm sorry to say that I didn't enjoy that chapter as much as I have the others. But, oh well, that's just me ^_^ As for the rest of it, truly inspiring! I can't wait for your next installment! The twists and turns that you've been throwing our way keep us on our toes. And I do have to compliment you on Bulma's personality in this fic, truly "kick-ass."
Until next time, ja ne,
~Saber |
Reviewed By: Rune On: July 07, 2003 13:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hullo,
I'm not rating this time as you already know it and
if you read your reviews please send the unedited version of yer 1st chapter to theresa@goetze.co.uk
thanks plenty in advance.
oh, and if i didn't mention YOUR STORY ROCKS!!!!!
Bye bye Rune |
Reviewed By: Rune On: July 07, 2003 13:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hullo,
I'm not rating this time as you already know it and
if you read your reviews please send the unedited version of yer 1st chapter to theresa@goetze.co.uk
thanks plenty in advance.
oh, and if i didn't mention YOUR STORY ROCKS!!!!!
Bye bye Rune |
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