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Reviewed By: Legana On: June 03, 2003 08:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...
first of all, I'm glad you updated =) Hope it won't take ya so long next time ^_^
about the story....
It's not such a suprise about Ilandra , I hate it that Bulma let Ilandra convince her like that, she should know better than to trust a reptile family.
I wonder what's going to happen to her when she gets to Freeza, but I know *almost* for sure she's gonna miss her Master.
I hope he will stop her before or something, but I'll see.
Love the story, I'm looking forward how it will go on now, because I have no idea what will happen now.
Keep on writing like this, I love it that it isn;t like most B/V ficcies. I just hope that B and V won't get so OOC now.
*looks at her with pleading eyes*
PLEASE DON'T WAIT TOO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( I will go on a holiday in a month , se please try to update before so I can read it here, I will probably go nuts if I'm on my holiday and I know you updated but I can't read! )
a little request from a loyal fan =)
but please do what's the best for you ^-^
Ja ne!
*waves*
ps: update soon :D |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 01:56 EDT
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don't mind the post above, that's my brother being a smart-ass.. |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 01:54 EDT
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I Love your story! You ahd me up until 4 a.m. reading it! I am hooked!
Tamako~ I read your comment and was thinking the same thing, but then again, Vegeta did give her the collar, so maybe the gravity doesn't affect her...I dunno..that's just my opinion |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: June 02, 2003 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color
FANTASTIC! hurry and update |
Reviewed By: Kim On: June 02, 2003 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's really well written, but I do have a question. I remember you posting your story on ff.net, what happened??? Oh, and Happy Belated Birthday! Yes, I know its VERY late but I just found your story today and read everything today ^_^. Well update soon! |
Reviewed By: Tomako Briefs On: June 01, 2003 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
In chapter 13, Bulma throws a goblet. But they're on Planet Vegeta, with 10 times Earth's gravity. Is Bulma strong enough to throw something in 10 times gravity? I mean, as soon as she lets go it should drop pretty quickly..
I haven't finished reading the whole story yet, but I thought I'd mention that science bit there. Good job, so far. |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's soul On: May 31, 2003 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crudly crap, I love this fanfic, I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter. Not to rush you or anything, but please hurry, hehe. Lots a Luv. |
Reviewed By: Yami On: May 27, 2003 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really good although I hope something
unexpected willhappen soon.
UPDATE SOON :) |
Reviewed By: d_whitesilver On: May 24, 2003 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Hope you get chapter 22 out soon! |
Reviewed By: Rune On: May 23, 2003 14:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fic, keep going |
Reviewed By: DarkPrincess On: May 19, 2003 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god this is a great fic! i want to know if vegeta is going to marry the bitch. actually i was going to have that happen in the story i am writing right now. and i would like to know if you dont mind if i put it in there. i thought about it before i started reading this fic though. so if you have the time would you e-mail me at: i_luv_me_88@msn.com and let me know if i can use that idea, i dont want to sound like im copying you though. well ttyfn! |
Reviewed By: J. Bird On: May 17, 2003 19:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Thsi fic just keeps on getting better and better. I LOVE IT! BEST DBZ FIC EVER!!! UPDATE SOON!!! yay. |
Reviewed By: J. Bird On: May 17, 2003 11:47 EDT
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Ack! Someone is after Bulma (or Illandra)! Please say it isn't so! Okay, enough dramatics. I love that bit of plot development. keep on writing! yay. |
Reviewed By: J. Bird On: May 17, 2003 09:10 EDT
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I agree. More of Bulma's character was revealed, and I like her much more now. This fic has turned out to be much better then I first thought it would be! |
Reviewed By: J. Bird On: May 16, 2003 21:33 EDT
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I preferred Bulma's character when she was fighting Vegeta, and not being so submissive. I really enjoyed the part where she tried to kill him with the clay sculpture. I hope that Bulma will be a bit more empowering in later cahpters. Your fic still RAWKS, and update as much as soon as possible. yay. |
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