| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sk8s [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 06:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh, Naughty Vegeta! Rawr!
Damn that's a naughty fanfic...it's so naughty I want more. Please update soon. It's really really really great! It's wicked awesome. It's...what's the word...ah, yes...it's
Sexastic!
Hell yes, I can't think of any suggestions or ideas right now, but if they come to mind, i will tell.
Love the fic, please update! |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 15:54 PST
Comment/Review:
I love it! |
Reviewed By: Reji On: April 01, 2003 06:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! Hot and steamy fic!!!! If my boss found out I was reading this during work, I'd be dead.
Hurry that update!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bEcca On: July 22, 2003 14:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
very good.. omq... does bulma not love veqeta?? thatz so sad.. is this a veqeta/bulma fic?? well update sooon~~~ payce outz~ |
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: March 31, 2003 15:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon I didn't think I would have liked these kinds of lemons but I do. I started reading this at FF.net but it was taken off I believe because now an edited verison is being put up. Well I just wanted to tell that your not the only one that likes these kind of lemons. Also its been Great thus far keep going ja ne ~_^ |
Reviewed By: bEcca On: July 22, 2003 14:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
very good.. omq... does bulma not love veqeta?? thatz so sad.. is this a veqeta/bulma fic?? well update sooon~~~ payce outz~ |
Reviewed By: Credik On: March 26, 2003 11:45 PST
Comment/Review:
hey I LUV the embrace the pain idea in ur latest chappy, .... BUT i still want 2 know what it would be like 4 vegeta 2 go 2 far with bulma and her 2 rebel |
Reviewed By: Legana On: March 24, 2003 09:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOO GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!!1
I love whips :PPPPP
great chappie girls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cannot WAIT until the next chap!
I got more pain than Bulma, with all the waiting for the next chapter, it's true tortuare!!!!!
Hehe Ilandra rocks, bi seksual ppl rule!
I should know, I am one :PP
KISSES, Legana!
dont wait too long with updating!!!!!!!!!
bye *waves* |
Reviewed By: LOLAEVA On: March 22, 2003 12:03 PST
Comment/Review:
WHAT DOES S&M MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ursula On: March 21, 2003 23:14 PST
Comment/Review:
totally awesome chap!!! starfuckers inc is a great song. |
Reviewed By: DragonQueen On: March 20, 2003 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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WHO HOO!oh yea that was so cool! can't wait to see what *reads* Ilandra does to Bulma!
Five bucks says whatever she does Vegeta will be enraged!
Tinisha: oh no i'm not going to take that bet..
MoMo: yea! you took my bullet money...*sniff sniff*
Me: o.O anywho can't wait for the next chapter! i can safely say i'm hooked to this story. this better have a good ending! o. |
Reviewed By: fallen_flutterfly On: March 20, 2003 17:06 PST
Comment/Review:
i love this story! can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 16:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ay! Oh that was a harsh lemon it was weird but good I think .That kind of pain shes brave GODdamn Vegeta you sick Fuck ! I love him no matter what!.
Well it was good nontheless Keep the chapys coming!
It is a sadist/B/V fic so the lemon HAS to be weird.
LAter! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 14:00 PST
Comment/Review:
dang nabit! I had this really cool review all written up, and there they go, cutting it off!!
I just wanted to say that u rock ^_^ (but u already knew that) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 13:58 PST
Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeee!!!!!!! >_ |
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