| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: LucrezaBorgia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first time reviewing here!
I love this story! Its very well written and the words flow. Good descriptions without overdoing it(not everything needs to be described). Ive never enjoyed a s&m flick.
my only question is when are u updating!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Pandora666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 17:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter you can write your lemon sense very well as well as keeping a good story going. This is rare in fan fic writers soo good job. I hope you continue to update often. |
Reviewed By: strompf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 11:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great story. Vegeta is perfect. I really don't like story lines that makes him out to be.....ugh...nice. |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 30, 2003 09:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I see what happened with the update. Anyway, great chapter. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON! :) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 01:21 EST
Comment/Review:
as always, another great chapter :) *purr* candle wax... nice touch ;)
though personally, I think Bulma shouda shoved that candle up his ass for hittin her in the last chapter.. but that's just me :D
then again, if she had, I wouldn't have been able to read that kick ass lemon! woo! you rock!
*tosses rose petals around you*
this fic just keeps getting better and better.
I'll be back soon!
Toodles u! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 23:53 EST
Comment/Review:
wow great chapter can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: bEcCa On: January 29, 2003 21:14 EST
Comment/Review:
i dont see any new chapterz... it says you have updated but theres nothin... well i hope you can fix the problem soon.... well payce out~! |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 29, 2003 08:46 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey Vegeta Goddess! There's something wrong here, it keeps on sayin that you've updated (ex.Jan.29) and there's nothing updated. |
Reviewed By: Credik On: January 28, 2003 20:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey LOL bout the guards looks.
As 4 the 13th chapter... Vegeta's a *******! DAMN IT!
oh well i hope in the next chapter that Bulma gets revenge somehow cuz right now she pathic cuz
she so scared, yet then again Vegeta is very intimidating... BUT STILL!!!!!!
Let There Be Power 2 Bulma!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: fallem_flutterfly On: January 28, 2003 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic. i go on mediaminer every day just to check if you;ve updated! keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: January 28, 2003 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is a huge B/V fic lover* I'm really addicted to this Fic...and i wish the whole entire thing was finished. *isn't good when sitting in suspense* Yer ideas are pretty interesting. Bondage and that sort of thing isn't my top preference but i'm really open-minded so i still enjoy it a lot. One thing i noticed with yer spelling is when you want to say "Thought" you spell it, "Though". it happens more than like, 10 times, so i just thought i'd say something. ^_^ I can't wait til you finish this exciting story. -You said something about needing a beta-reader..if yer still looking email me at Lone_Vixen@hotmail.com cause it sounds interesting. I'm really good with grammar+spelling so i think i could help out.- Anyways, keep writing! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! This is one of the best B/V stories I've ever read!!! The cat fight between Zucchini and Bulma had me cracking up!!! Ahhh, the power of we bitchy women.....Veggie-chan's acting like a real dick at the end of this chapter, but he knows he cares for Bulma.....who knew S & M could be so entertaining? Hurry and update!!! |
Reviewed By: Fallin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 12:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you girls have been busy.Whoa...
excellently written. Damn that Veggie is such a bastard, such a sadist as well. You girls are really good at this so continue, well I pride myself in pridicting plots, I have a idea of what may happen. So I can't wait till the next chappie. Keep up the excellent work girls!!! |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 27, 2003 21:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its heyheyhey and m dying from anticipation so i gotta read!buhbye!
"~muahz~" |
Reviewed By: Brown-Eyed Girl On: January 27, 2003 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story so far.
Can't wait 'till the next chapter.
But I hate the fact that Vegeta's being abusive to Bulma!! |
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