| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
| Pages (55): [ « ‹ 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 ] |
Reviewed By: DramaGeek4life On: March 16, 2003 14:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic and I really enjoy reading it. I don't know what style of writing you're usin' but I sure do like it. I noticed 1 or 2 grammer and spellings but that's it. I really enjoy your fic and the cliffhangers and stuff like that. I also enjoy the originality of your fic although things like this have been done before I haven't seen a lot like yours. In all I enjoy your fic to the point i can't wait for the next chappie so keep writing and HURRY! Please : )
Thanx,
DramaGeek4life |
Reviewed By: Credik On: February 09, 2003 14:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Ha Vegeta is losing ground with his women. Anyways i thought of something and wanted 2 metion it 2 u. I'm curious 2 c what would vegeta do if Bulma was seriously injured cuz not 2 many people like her being Vegeta's girl and vegeta isn't that nice 2 her either.
-just something to think about! |
Reviewed By: Carry On: January 12, 2003 08:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! LOL I LOVE THIS FAN FIC!!! ;-) |
Reviewed By: Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 06:38 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*blinks* wow!
Omg, i don't think i've ever read a fic quite like this! I mean, the sadist really fits Vegita!! And the lemons, well, O_O whoo. I love Ilandra's character, she's almost like Bulma but there's something beneath the surface. I just keep waiting for Vegita to push Bulma over the edge and for her to snap. Haha, this almost reminds me of Linkin Park songs (*cheers*)!!
UPDATE! I LUV IT!!
~Bry |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 19:01 PST
Comment/Review:
*Drool* omg that was awsome it's my favorite lemon chapter you've done so far. i think you should do more demon lover scenario's they're definatly yummy |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 08, 2003 15:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT |
Reviewed By: Arista Darksun On: January 20, 2003 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is the best B/V fics i ever read! i absolutly adore it. Plz update soon! *chears* |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: January 14, 2003 15:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please God, no threesomes in this otherwise awesome piece of fiction! However, handcuffs on Vegeta is a sexy idea... |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 13:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! I stayed up until 4 a.m. reading the whole thing. You have me hooked. :)
Tomako, I read ur comment and was thinking the same thing, but then again, didn't Vegeta give her the collar? I dunno if that would make a difference, but then its like the gravity isn't affecting her...I dunno..just my opinion..lol..
Please post more soon! |
Reviewed By: WoW On: February 15, 2003 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i didn't think brolly would be such a bad guy? And who is the hooded figure, i have an idea...lol. What are they talkin about when they say she knows to much? And i love when Vegeta gets jealous of Don Juan! LOL! so kawaii! Keep writting, can't wait for the next chap! Make it a lil longer if ya can! The more the better! |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: January 04, 2003 04:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta is such a bastard--I love it! He's the good kind of bastard (if such a thing exists). I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 12:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww, this is turning out to be a really good fic, I absolutly love it! ^^ -luv Roshy- |
| Pages (55): [ « ‹ 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 ] |
