| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamer On: December 23, 2002 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOHH!!! Please update very soon! I love it so far. PLEASE UPDATE!!! :) |
Reviewed By: dreamer On: December 23, 2002 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOHH!!! Please update very soon! I love it so far. Font Color |
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 02:26 EST
Comment/Review:
Are you makeing Bulma crazy. I would jump him and rape him myself. But i Love the story |
Reviewed By: Faye4463 On: December 22, 2002 21:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going, It's great. LOVE IT!!! |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: December 21, 2002 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely LOVE it....but can u make bulma jsu a tad bit stronger
~`much love~` |
Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 22:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that was just cruel to leave it at that |
Reviewed By: Faye4463 On: December 19, 2002 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! Please continue Vegeta Goddess! Write chapter three for us. Also I commend the author, this fic has a great theme to it. Very smart for choosing vegeta goddess to continue while you wereon vacation, she will do exellent. SHE'S GREAT! |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: December 17, 2002 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEAUTIFUL story but.......no offence..but learn to spell hun!i mean u can add lil stuff that we should kno but DAYUM try to make it look presentable!
much luv to it! |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 03, 2003 01:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story, is Kakarrot going to be in there i hope so i love kakarrot. |
Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 18:29 EST
Comment/Review:
i think i started reading this story on fanfiction.net until they said no NC-17 fics the *%&#&#@, i can't wait to read the rest. |
Reviewed By: Lots of love but nowhere to put it On: December 15, 2002 15:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic and think your doing a relly good job! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 08:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it a lot please update soon |
Reviewed By: Neo Huntress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really well written so far. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover On: December 13, 2002 19:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Why did you start it over? Why couldn't you just continue. Or did I just read this off of ff.net? |
Reviewed By: Faye4463 On: December 13, 2002 14:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great!!! Very different from the rest of the "Bulma gets kidnapped" fics. Keep it up and PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING!!! ^_^ |
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