| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lullaby On: June 04, 2003 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is totally awesome! I beg of you to continue as soon as you can! I can't wait to see more! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: April 14, 2003 08:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOHOOOOOO!!!!!
that chapter RULED!
I love the new Bulma, hehe little fixen!
men are so easy lol and Zucchini is so damn funny! I love woman who are jealous because their man get more turned on by me, hehe! Though they can be real bitches :s I guess we're gonna experience that with our dear Princess as well ay =)
I really love this story, I keep repeating it, but I do ^_^
and I agree with Vegeta btw, he's not cruel, acting weak is only gonna make you more weak, It's better to get over it immidiatly.
anywaaaaaaaaaay, looking forward until the next chappie!
Lena, goodluck with your Uni and getting on mediaminer =)
exams suck, sigh... that reminds me, got one coming up as well...
Did I say one? I meant three!
lol, TRY and update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will be waiting for it!
Kisses and huggles to both of you, and your great writingstyle and ideas for this story!
*bows politely *
Ladies, I wish thee farewell, until the next review!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shamaria On: April 14, 2003 06:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffhanger...CLIFF HANGER!!!??!!!! U EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON!!! > |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 22:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
GODDD!!!!! UPDATEEE SOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!! IM DYINGGG HEREEEE!!!!!! DONT DO A LAVENDERGODDESS CLIFY ON MEEEE!!!!!
UPDATE SOONNN!! I NNEEEDDDDDDDD THE LEMONNNNN!!!!
SHITT!!!!
Ahem the chapy was good@!!! I loved it!!!
I need the lemon OK!!! Thank UUUUU!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Bulma - in this one On: April 13, 2003 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! How I would LOVE to be Bulma in this fanfic............or actually in al lteh NY-17 fanfics...............mmmmmmmmm with vegeta...anyways ...heh heh.....WOW this fic....is perfect...make shur the next lemon is long and juicy.......the way pervs like myself like it ^_- |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 21:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL EVIL PERSON! *throws her boot at you*
CLIFFHANGERS ARE MEAN!! BAD!!
*takes a deep breath*
well, great chapter ^_^ TOO BAD IT TOOK YOU FOREVER TO POST IT!! *throws the other boot*
hehe... I love the way Bulma fucks with the Princess...
keep up the good work!
AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON, DAMNIT!! |
Reviewed By: Credik On: April 13, 2003 21:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
YESSSSS
the new chappy was one of the best of hte story so far, the only other one as could was the demon chapter.
love bulma's new attitude
Can't wait 2 see him eating outta her hand |
Reviewed By: NIGHTSCREAM On: April 13, 2003 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always VG another HOT chapter, but did you have to end with a cliffhanger. You have me chomping the bit for the next chapter already! Good Job on turning Bulma around, i can't wait to see what she has in store for the V-man! anyway keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: DragonQueen On: April 13, 2003 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! that was great! hope you can ge the new chapter out sooner!!
Vegeta*reads lastest chapter* OMAE O KOROSU! WHAT THE HELL!
DQ: isn't it great?! i love this fic ^_^
Vegeta: HENTAI I SWEAR THIS IS HENTAI!
Bulma:*Reads lastest chapter* I LOVE IT! keep up the good work!*thumbs up* this gives me some new ideas*wink wink*
Vegeta: i love the sound of that!
DQ: >. |
Reviewed By: Celeb Ryu On: April 12, 2003 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is onbe of the best fics i've ever read! OMG it's just...wonderful...love the S&M ^_^ and the bondage scene....my god...it was genius, pure genius! |
Reviewed By: Jen On: April 10, 2003 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, I like how Bulma isn’t some innocent bitch, lol. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: hmmmm..... none on this syte On: April 07, 2003 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daym... i lub this stori!!! ish all co0... meeh and all mwai freinds tink ish awsome... well review later maybeeh... paiz ...
lub,
mai-lee |
Reviewed By: Arista Darksun On: April 06, 2003 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Bondage. Its true that its diffrent from your usual lemon scene but still simply delicious! I adore.. hmmm Lucky Bulma. A very yummy piece of work. *listens to starfuckers,inc* rock on! Plz write more scenes like these! hot!!! i need more. |
Reviewed By: The Ouiji's Mate On: April 05, 2003 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best works i've ever read.Very, very creative. I never pictured Vegeta like that...But it really does fit. Woderfully descriptive lemon scenes as well. Kepp on going!!
Sincerely,
The Ouiji's Mate(Manda) |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: April 03, 2003 02:38 EST
Comment/Review:
Excellent Chapter! Can't wait for more. |
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