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Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 05, 2003 01:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, it's just me. Couldn't remember eather I've reviewed on this fic lately. Well, it great at any rate.hmmm...that rhymed. well, gotta go. keep it comming.
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Rayvyn Styx On: June 04, 2003 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter! I love this story, Lena! You can still send me the chapters if you want me to beta read them for you... Have fun and get the next chapter out really soon! |
Reviewed By: Kudos On: June 04, 2003 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like some things..i hate somethings...that simple...KEEP WRITING THOUGH! |
Reviewed By: DarkPrincess On: June 04, 2003 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! keep going! |
Reviewed By: d_whitesilver On: June 04, 2003 01:28 EDT
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Yaaay! Chapter 22 is out! You don't know how many times I've been checking back here to see if it was out yet! Well, I'm glad it is finally out. ^_^ Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: dragonblue On: June 03, 2003 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the %$#%^& are you doing? You've got Bulma going against what she told Vegeta in chapter 21. Where she said that even if she had the chance to escape from him that she wouldn't. So this chapter is really messed up!!!
***************UPDATE A.S.A.P.***************** |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: June 03, 2003 20:42 EDT
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BULMA WHAT THE FUCKKK!!!!!! R U DOINGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!
KAMI-SAMA HELP THAT WOMAN TO UNDERSTAND!! ILANDRA SUXS!!!! FREEZA WILL HAVE HER DO SOMETHING! LIke tecnological ! BULMA u get a out hell and get to an even bigger hell WHAT THE FUCKKK!!And wheres VEGETA!!!!!!????????
UPPDATEEEE SOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 03, 2003 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhh!!!!!Bulma can't leave! Veggie-can needs her.Illandria obviously has something evil planned. Update A.S.A.P. Don't leave me hanging for so long. I'm serious.
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 16:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
*Checks to see if another chapter is written..*
"Sigh..."I need more story!!! :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Noooo! Why did Bulma choose to go with Ilandra?! She's insane! Please, please, please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Rune On: June 03, 2003 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, a really cool suprise. I can't wait for the
next chapter, it is the most origignal B/V
fiction ever read, keep up with the great work!! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's soul On: June 03, 2003 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude man, that was kick ass, I couldn't believe that
I hope Vegeta does something, I love so much to imagine him naked
when he's with Bulma. Please post the next chapter soon!! Please.
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Kick Ass |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: June 03, 2003 11:46 EDT
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Wow! That's quite a plot twist! I knew Ifalna was up to something... Is Vegeta going to 'rescue' Bulma? How will Bulma be treated at Frieza's? Do they have deeper feelings for each other? Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: June 03, 2003 10:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!!!!! Bulma has to be free!!!!
Continue it, please!
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: holly On: June 03, 2003 09:06 EDT
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Wow! That's kind of a twist! But I like it! I would have never thought that things could turn out like that!
I hope you don't need too much time for the next chapter since I'm already sooo curious about what is going to happen!!! |
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