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Reviewed By: princesscatgirl On: November 07, 2003 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank yuo thank you thank you i love well any way thanks for witing this chapter and all try to hurry with the next
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Reviewed By: smirnoffice_23 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 16:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first off i love this fic. i have been reading it since you started. please update soon. i cant get enough of it.^_^
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: November 03, 2003 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excuses, excuses. I understand the part about haveing a boyfriend that takes up a great deal of your time. I'm just now barely getting the chance to read your last two chapters. Good they are, but, it is now November, and you posted your last update in September, so, get with it and give us another update, okay? Mate 'ne Saiyan Princess
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: November 03, 2003 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excuses, excuses. I understand the part about haveing a boyfriend that takes up a great deal of your time. I'm just now barely getting the chance to read your last two chapters. Good they are, but, it is now November, and you posted your last update in September, so, get with it and give us another update, okay? Mate 'ne Saiyan Princess
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Reviewed By: princess cat girl On: November 02, 2003 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um i kinda wanted to respound to the person called revewer first of all i think the reson that bulma is actong so diffrent from diffrent times is because she is unstable unlike how you said she isint and yes both vegeta and bulma do go slightly out of charicter but if you were bulma you would change and if thar was no freeza and vegetas planet was not destroide then he would be diffreent as well so i can under stand why sh canged them it makes them more realistic and why did vegeta let them go on so long at the party well for one he's a guy and guys like to wache girls fight two he's sayan-jiin and they are natroly atractide to fights a double whame and yes its true bulma would had bin snaped in half if vegeta was not carful but he's not aq particlary nice guy so why would he or anyone els for that matter state that he was bing carfle with her but i do hald to say the i agree with on the candal wax i think vegeta had a wussy mulment by the uuuuuuuuppppppppp ddddddddaaaaaaaatttttttteeeeeeeee!!!!!!! pleas! just to let you know this is catgirl but they say mt name is alredy taken o well later
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 00:10 EST
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Vegeta's reactions still seem dead-on. He doesn't understand how someone could have power and not want more -- I think that Brolly hasn't taken the throne because he just doesn't want that kind of authority. It's the same reason why Goku never tried to rule Earth. I also like Vegeta's reaction to Bulma -- angry; wants her back like anything; extremely pushy about it; hasn't lost sight of the greater consequences to his people. ~ ~ Lastly, Bulma herself and her little realization. I wonder what she's going to do about it.
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan (Cant be bothered to log in) On: October 29, 2003 09:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far! I'm loving it, I really like your writing style, and damn you know how to keep us in suspense! Update soon please! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Tomako Briefs [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 13:35 EDT
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I'm not big on yuri, but it was well written. ^_^
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Reviewed By: d_whitesilver On: October 15, 2003 01:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
It's been over a month... Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: psycho is me On: September 23, 2003 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: I love you!
Reviewed By: Jess-Chan On: September 15, 2003 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I freakin' love you and this fic! *glomps* Will you marry me!? ^^()
Hehehe...*gives thumbs up* For serious, I am totally in love with this fic! I just finished reading it in two days and I'm not working on re-reading it ^_^() Update soon?
Bondage and S&M stuff is so hot ^_^ They're the best fetishes out there *jumps up and down*
Awesome job! I can't wait for mooooore! |
Reviewed By: ice_queen6 On: September 15, 2003 06:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good please hurry up with the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Reviewer On: September 10, 2003 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I have to say that unfortunately, this review will contain some criticism. I have enjoyed your fic and read all of it till now, and I have to tell you that I think you write quite well. I normally wouldn’t have read such a graphic fic, but something about it just compelled me to continue reading.
However, there’s a couple of things that have bothered me about the fic. First of all, how do Bulma and Vegita manage to have such unrestrained sex without Bulma being broken in half is amazing. Isn’t Vegita super humanly strong? There should be more reference to Vegita controlling himself when having sex. Also, Vegita going to the Med Ward just because he was burned with candle wax? He’s a Saiyajin, I don’t think that would affect him at all. Also, when Illandra asked Bulma what did she think about Vegita, she answered he was smooth like Don Juan. After all the damage he’s caused her? He’s raped her used her and sure, she has enjoyed it because she seems to be quite a masochist, but still, it is very improbably she would say that about Vegita. The only women he’s with seem to be whores who he rapes and then kills. Is that Don Juan? Don Juan seduced women, he did not force them or hurt them. The scene in the party, where Bulma and Zucchini go at it. How is it possible that Vegita let it go on for so long? He didn’t stop it on time and let them make such a scene. Isn’t that strange? Both Bulma and Vegita seem to act a bit out of character once in a while, like when
Vegita asked Bulma if she loved him. Why in the world would he ask her that? At times it seems Bulma is way too balanced for what happened to her
and sometimes she acts like a little girl and yet others like a real whore. Maybe you would consider rewriting some stuff in your fic, and if you do decide to do that this fic will be quite remarkable. |
Title: MORE
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: September 08, 2003 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!
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Title: e23K177(easykill)
Reviewed By: ChompOnThis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 06:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. Are you done with it. I hope not. Please continue to make chapters to this story. I have never read a story like this before. Really cool. Peace
CHOMP
ON
THIS
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