"Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Me! [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 20:28 EST Comment/Review: You have got to love how evil Kakarot is, dontcha?
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 19:51 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Bad cliffies bad! lol TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Mely On: January 19, 2004 16:10 EST Comment/Review: I love where things are going. Keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: leonie On: January 19, 2004 15:33 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is my favourite story!!!! I hope you update soon!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: bim,bo an ditz On: January 15, 2004 09:46 EST Comment/Review: update plzzzzzzz!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: January 14, 2004 06:02 EST Comment/Review: update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: toosethy On: January 11, 2004 07:25 EST Comment/Review: Very nice - even for you (kidding) I love your work. It's very unique and poetic.
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Reviewed By: crimson darkness On: January 09, 2004 05:15 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i really like your style of writing and how dark it is but ur letter chapters were a a bit short and it was a bit of a let down also a little less description i know u want to get ur point and intense imagery across but too much detail and it just gets too boring anyways it's a really good fic and i can't wait for your next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: cee cee On: December 20, 2003 08:54 EST Comment/Review: Great, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: December 20, 2003 06:47 EST Comment/Review: plz plz plz try an update b4 xmas! :0) this fic rocks!
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Reviewed By: Setos-gurl On: December 20, 2003 00:28 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE THIS STORY! Its so well written and creative, its honestly my favorite ragon ball z fic! Anyways, please continue soon, and merry christmas!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Takara On: December 19, 2003 02:13 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice chapter. Very visual and emotional.
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Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk On: December 18, 2003 07:38 EST Comment/Review: hiya plz update soon!!!! surfs up! ^_^ and merry xmas and a happy new year to every1!!!!!
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Reviewed By: VG On: December 18, 2003 07:21 EST Comment/Review: review! REVIEW!
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 01:29 EST Comment/Review: Hooray, you updated! I'd rather have a short chapter, than none at all. Can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story, especially the sexual relationship between Vegeta and Bulma, and I'm not a 20 year old virgin. LOL Sorry to hear about your depression. I hope you are feeling better soon. ~Gail~
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