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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! IS THAT CLEAR? I WANT MORE NOW!!!!!! ....please? |
Reviewed By: Kameko On: June 21, 2003 01:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!!!! DOP YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW LONG I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER TO POP UP! WRITE MORE DAMNIT! ITS TOO GOOD! I AM GUNNA DIE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 23:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
She doesn't love him, but she's going to miss him. That seems very appropriate to the characters filtered through these events, as do Bulma's feelings of losing touch.
Hm... Why did Brolly phrase Bulma's departure that way? If Veggie believes her to have been taken against her will, she'll have an easier time of it if V's guys catch them first. |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 20, 2003 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you, what is it wiht you and cliff hangers o well jest hurry with more chapters k thanks |
Reviewed By: Rune On: June 20, 2003 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well hello it is me again now i'm rating 10/10 for
all categories
and i can only repeat myself awesome fic
most original(most hentai,not that i don't like it)
of all b/v fics and now the story is getting really
addictive and exciting
keep going withe the great stuff
i'll make sure to check your story everyday
hope this review makes you happy
see you soon, Rune (0_0 it rhymes) mad laugh |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: June 20, 2003 08:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
Another good update ^^ I figured Bulma was lying when she said she would stick with Vegeta before~ it would be way to OOC for her to just fall in love with Vegeta like that. Perhaps she'll regret her decision soon. And what's Frieza up to? I don't really mind cliff-hangy endings as long as they are resolved - so update soon!! |
Reviewed By: kris On: June 20, 2003 05:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots of good information in that chapter! Evil cliffhanger, but I like it! Update again soon! |
Reviewed By: baOwey On: June 20, 2003 05:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
HAHA im soo sry.. i meant name..as baowey and title as a chapter a week...its 2:53 am right now and i decided to chek some fanfics before i go to bed and i had to read your update.. sry for the previous review!!-.-;; |
Reviewed By: a chapter a week !??! On: June 20, 2003 05:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I’m on holidays now so I’ll be able to write chapters a lot more often! At least a chapter a week!
..a chapter a week?? are you serious?!?! at first wen i read de cliffie..i was like..noO!!!! vegeta is obsess wif bulma..dats good...and den suddenly the chapter ended..... ahh!!! please update more, your story is great!!! its weird because wenever i read bondage between v/b in this story..it literally digs a hole in the pit of my stomache...you have to update more!! and plz plz plz mean it wen you say one chap a week..ahh!!! PLZ!!! |
Reviewed By: Betty Boop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story and I'm really geting in to it but when are you going to post chapter 23?! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 17, 2003 18:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
Please, please update! I'm really getting tired of waiting. I have little patients(in case you didn't already know)and I'm curious, so, that just made my small bit of patients, get even smaller. Please update soon, or else I'm going to go insane. Seriously. And don't listen to that bakayaro that called you a dumbass, he/she can shut the hell up! Update soon.
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Twisted Angel On: June 17, 2003 17:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY is for horses. Please Update soon. I'm going through withdrawls, and I need my fix. lol. please update soon. |
Reviewed By: PMRGchik On: June 16, 2003 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
S&M definetly is not my thing, but I love how you've managed to work it into this story. Such a creative story is hard to come by! I look forward to your next update. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 15, 2003 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(crying) pleas pleas pleas another chapter (gets on nees)i'll do anthing pleas |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 14, 2003 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o and the one that called you a dumbass is totaly stupid has no idea what she talking about lets see her come up with a better fanfic |
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