| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 14, 2003 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hurry up and write more im wating jk but really im going to go insain if i dont finish the story |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 02:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 15, 2003 15:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, tis me again. Just wondering when you're going to update again. So, when are you? You do know that it's not very nice to leave us all awaiting the next chapter, waiting to find out what will happen, don't you? I think you do. Like I said before, I love to keep my readers waiting, and guessing also, but, it's not nice. Please update soon. Onegai, onegai, onegai! I'm begging you here!!! Update soon.
Ja ne'
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: OneLuv88 On: June 13, 2003 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!! I love your Fanfic!! Its really good! Please make the chapters longer!! Hurry up with the next chapter!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 14:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!
Update, Update, Update, Update, Update, Update!!!
PLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!
please,please, please,please!!! And to 'hard love': I happen to like Manson's version of Sweet Dreams, so lay off.
Ja ne.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 16:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To: "You dumbass"
OH YEAH!? WELL I GIVE THIS STORY 10 ALL THE WAY! KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING GIRL CUZ UR STORY KICKS ASS! |
Reviewed By: Naomi On: June 11, 2003 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE THE BEST FANFIC WRITER I'VE EVER KNOWN!!!!!!! Let me just say this... you are a very talented writer. I love your fanfic Its very creative! I read your fanfic over 10 times from chapter 1-22 ^-^ keep writing more!!
Can you make your chapters a little longer? |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 10, 2003 19:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: hard love On: June 10, 2003 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you dumbass!!!!
this song was originlly done by the EURYTHMICS
and that sicko marylin manson did a sicko remake
and and
BLAHBLAHBLAH!!!!
YOU NEED TO GET YOU GURDANMED SOURCES RIGHT!!!!!
i gave this a bad rating cuz u are a sicko!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tamela On: June 10, 2003 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant figure out what kind of reating i would give you but i really love it!!!
plus the fact that im not supposed to read this kind of stuff makes it even better!
ooohhhhh i think the guards must be so hot
[i dont think Vegeta is that hot cuz i dont like shorter men]
anyway i think that this is grade a quality ehrmm......fiction...product? [probably didnt phrase that roght!
bye!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: kris On: June 06, 2003 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a twist! First bulma says she would never leave even if she had an oportunity, then she does. She must know that she will be killed. Please update Soon!!! I check daily! Please! |
Reviewed By: Rune On: June 06, 2003 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOO LENA!!!
You sure showed the deletey guys at ff.net
didn't you. Well done for being 7th most
popular...
(Update soon, by the way) Smiles |
Reviewed By: kris On: June 06, 2003 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, but I don't understand why Bulma totally changed her changed her mind.She didn't hesitate to say she would stay then thinks that life would be easier with Frieza? I am very interested in what will happen.Please update SOON! I'm a little obsessed with this story. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 11:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
interesting twist. cant' wait to see if my suspicions are right. ^_^ update soon. |
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