| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOK YOU MADE THE BEST FANFIC EVER BECOME AN AUTHOR OR SOMETHING.I BET THAT THE PERSON WHO CREATED DBZ NEVER THOUGT OF THIS MAGNIFISANT PIECE OF ART.WHAT HAPPENS TO BULMA HOW ABOUT THAT FREAKY GUY IN THE HOODY.YO,VEGETA HAS TO FIND OUT THIS RIGHT.I TRUST YOU KEEP THEM COMMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FROM:YUNI |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOK YOU MADE THE BEST FANFIC EVER BECOME AN AUTHOR OR SOMETHING.I BET THAT THE PERSON WHO CREATED DBZ NEVER THOUGT OF THIS MAGNIFISANT PIECE OF ART.WHAT HAPPENS TO BULMA HOW ABOUT THAT FREAKY GUY IN THE HOODY.YO,VEGETA HAS TO FIND OUT THIS RIGHT.I TRUST YOU KEEP THEM COMMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FROM:YUNI |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 08:18 EST
Comment/Review:
YAY ANOTHER EXCELENT CHAPTER!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHO THIS DUDE IN THE HOOD THINKS HE IS TO ORDER BULMA DEAD!!! AHH WHAT THE HELL? I THOUGHT BODY GUARDS WERE SUPPOSED TO BY LOYAL! IM SCARED FOR BULMA... I ONLY HOPE VEGETA COMES TO HER RESCUE! |
Reviewed By: leena On: February 19, 2003 19:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter.^_~ It was so kawaii when Vegeta was jealous of Don Juan. The incident with Brolly and the hooded character is very interesting. Will he carry through with the evil plan against Bulma? Must stay tuned to find out! |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 23, 2003 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uuuuppddddaaaaaaatttttttttteeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
ppppppppplllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssse!!!
thanks |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 04:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm. I totally avoid B/V slave stories like the plague... but I LOVE BDSM! And sappy lovey-dovey B/V makes me nauseous. So naturally I love this! The only non-complimentary thing I have to say is that "suit" is something you wear - "suite" is a room or set of rooms. Thwack your beta. ;)
Sucks that Brolly looks to be shaping up traitor... he rocks as a good guy. Maybe he'll have a change of heart?
My suggestion for next bedroom scene -- bondage! Whooo! Not that Vegeta needs it to overpower her or anything... but straps and chains rock. =^_^= |
Reviewed By: Miko no Sakura On: February 20, 2003 20:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHO IS THE PERSON IN THAT SHROUD!?!?!?! OMG!!! I'M SCARED FOR BULMA! AW. POOR BULMA! She'll live. She HAS to. You're too good of a writer ot kill her off NOW. *looks around suspiciously* right? right? You know, this is amazing. Brilliant. Maybe you should become a real author- you know, professionally. You sure have "vision"! Yay for you! Congrats! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: February 17, 2003 08:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta jealous? Of Don Juan???
That is sooooo funny. Great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 16, 2003 10:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh *claps her hands excitingly*
GREAT!!!
I wonder what's next....who's the hooded man..
No Ou maybe? *is curious* ooh...
hehe, Vegeta having a manicure, funny, see him with a green mask in front of me already LOL *NOT*
looking forward until the email with Update slave!!!!!!!
cannot wait!
Great Fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love, Legana.
hehe don juan of saij-yans, how do you come up with it, great, just simply great! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 09:45 EST
Comment/Review:
ha ha. vegeta's gonna kill don juan! how funny. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 23:44 EST
Comment/Review:
O.O
U left it just like THAT!
BAD AUTHOR!
I want more! Please? I thought Bulma's body guards were supposed to be loyal? *cries* BASTARD!!
heh.. Vegeta jealous over a fictional character.. wee!
ya
update soon |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 22:26 EST
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Mysteria On: February 15, 2003 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it. It made me laugh, it made me respect Vegeta. He wasn't so lovy dovey and I loved it! |
Reviewed By: katt On: February 15, 2003 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, great fic. i really liked it. hope u continue. |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 15, 2003 19:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN IT damn it damn it! Cliffy no likey! Bad! SHAME! ON U! Now who's the ass that wants to kill Bulma Let me at him/her GRRRRRR! *Wants people to hold me back*
*smirKs*
Ahem! Sorry Keep it up I liked the chap Update soon! |
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