"Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kari-chan On: December 29, 2002 10:39 PST Comment/Review: I think this is a cool story. It's a lot more realistic than a lot of other a/u's I've read. It really has a great plotline! |
Reviewed By: Faye4463 On: December 29, 2002 08:27 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOOOOH!!! You are too good. Did you have to keep us hanging there though? Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: oui On: December 27, 2002 19:24 PST Comment/Review: great |
Reviewed By: Fallin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 09:23 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Heya!!!
Vegeta Goddess I'm an old fan of yours from f.F NET and I have read your stuff in a while but as I can see it's gotten BETTTER AND BETTER. Great plot!! Lady D I have to give you some credit too EXCELLENT work!!Well keep writing and hope for a new chappie soon!!
gotta blaze
Fallin |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 00:01 PST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: keep going chica ^_^ |
Reviewed By: amazon fox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 21:11 PST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ahhhh, very nice!!!! I love fics like this...XD Keep it going! dont make B/V fall in love for a while, I love how hes so suducive... XD GO GO GO! WRITE MORE! I MUST KNOW!!! Next chapter is comming out when? XD |
Reviewed By: faye4463 On: December 26, 2002 20:12 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOOH. Very good; please keep up with the frequent updates, i love it so far. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: nano On: December 26, 2002 19:58 PST Comment/Review: KEEP GOING!!! PLEASE ;) |
Reviewed By: Eddie Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 08:07 PST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is really good! I can't wait for more! :) |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed On: December 25, 2002 19:14 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the best story i read so far for a long time so hurry up and update.
Renee
RisinIndeed |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 16:20 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is quite interesting, in spite of the fact that this type of story has been told to death. I think that what makes this story 'gel' is that your co-writers have done a good job in blending each chapter well, and that is not a easy task. I'll be looking forward to more chapters in the future, update soon! ~_^ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: December 23, 2002 16:51 PST Comment/Review: LOVE IT KEEP GOIN |
Reviewed By: sandy_luv On: December 23, 2002 14:37 PST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOWEE!!really good! |
Reviewed By: xenian8 On: December 23, 2002 14:34 PST Comment/Review: really good, keep going |
Reviewed By: namek_gurl On: December 23, 2002 14:32 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love it... please update sO_On! |
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