| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 18:55 CDT
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I'm sorry. I just wanted to be your 100th reviewer! *L* But wai! I've got a lot of catching up to do with this fic. Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: katzchen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 08:12 CDT
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Do finish the Aya Shuldig story, it's interesting. a pairing i've never thought of. Ooo, and the Yohji - Ran story is coming along quite nicely, though i would have expected Brad and Asuka to fight him over Ran when they were discovered. All in all tho, good update! |
Reviewed By: nari On: April 12, 2003 06:02 CDT
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a damn good fic i tell U. |
Reviewed By: GoD~Goddess of Death (too lazy to sign in) On: April 09, 2003 16:54 CDT
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You are you evil, you know that, right? leaving it there, I think that Youji should have over heard that, ^^; but yeah, Brad does know that Ran is a guy, right? |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 15:09 CDT
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Won't Crawford be in for a rude awakening if he attempts to rape Ran. ^__^ Well all good things must come to an end ... just tell yourself ... sequel ... sequel. :) |
Reviewed By: Laguna chan On: April 09, 2003 07:38 CDT
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is next chap gonna be brad/ran?
gonna ended soon? that soooooo sad ;-;
what heppen to aya and schu? |
Reviewed By: shaotome On: April 08, 2003 20:01 CDT
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awww, i hope everything is fine between them. and i think it sooo said that this story is going to end. but still, its one of the best fics i ever read. can't wait to find out whats going to happen, ja! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 19:20 CDT
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^_^ Wow! I've been away for a while and you've already updated ^o^ YAY!! Okay, chapter 17 was quite sad and for some reasons it makes sense if you pair Schuldig with Aya ^_^ I don't mind if you don't like Ken so much, at least you've married him off to Yuriko ^_^ and I hope the best for Schuldig and Aya's relationship. As for the next chapter Aya was really getting teary-eyed -_- Hmmm... so he'd confessed and Youji doesn't mind ^_^ I wonder what will happen to their relationship. Okay the new chapter was quite a little scary to read at first, because of Asuka's jealousy there and kidnapping poor Ran.
Even though I've noticed a few mistakes in your work, I like the story ^_^
Please continue this fic soon ^_^. |
Reviewed By: katzchen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 08:36 CDT
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Oh lord. poor Aya, he's so confused. And Asuka is a bitch. Grr.
You're using quotation marks the normal way now! yay! I didn't really mind when it was wierd, but it's easier to read this way. Thank you for the update, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 22:12 CDT
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*blinks* wow that was strange. crawford/asuka now that's scary...
i guess i've accepted that you just don't write long chapters *big sigh* it's such a tease when you onle write like 5 paragraphs worth... i'd rather you put off the post and give us a nice hefty sized chapter.
but anyway, now the big romantic moment comes! well... after ran gets away from crawford... will they find out aya is actually ran?? or will yohji stop them in time???
i challenge you:
Do all of the scene with yohji chasing after ran, and the entirety of the hotel room in one chapter.
Mara |
Reviewed By: Merigold On: April 07, 2003 21:21 CDT
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“Hmmm…. Want me to rape her for you?”
Asuka cheered. “Really?!? Oh, thank you sooooooo much!!!!”
LOL that's kinda creepy! Keep writin' ^^ |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:55 CDT
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Awww, poor Ran! Yohji's teasing was so cute! I guess he's gonna have no choice very soon but to let Ran know that he knows...if it doesn't come out before then with the whole Crawford/Asuka thing.
Of course, there are the loose ends with Aya and Schu, too. |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 14:06 CST
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Waaaaaaaa! I'm SO sorry!!! But there won't be a new chapter, this weekend... Well, I've got the thing finished, but my comp is messing up everything!!! I'm very sorry, as soon, as I fixed it, I'll update, ok?? *runs away, sobbing and hides in a corner* |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:51 CST
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Man, poor Aya! What a slap in the face to find Ken married to someone else! I wasn't expecting that!
And Aya's revelation to Yohji was sweet, even if he thinks Yohji didn't hear him. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 14:04 CST
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yay! a new chapter! but again... longer! *whines* your chapters are too short and your fic is so good! it's horrible to tease us like this! please write longer chapters! |
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