| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 20:27 CST
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Bitch on wheels Asuka and dastardly Schu all in one chapter? BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Scary woman indeed. Very cute ... now you have to get Ken in the act or doesn't he care that his fiancee is missing? |
Reviewed By: Sylph On: January 08, 2003 13:42 CST
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Heehee...chapter 5 was fun. So when will the bubble pop? Youji is so mean playing with Ran and Aya while he know what's going on. Wicked!! Good luck with exams then write more. |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 00:57 CST
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Great! You've updated again. Thanks heaps. I do hope Yohji will find out about Ran's little secret soon. Although one suspect he already knows.
And unless you're gonna give us a juicy lemon somewhere in the future, I'm sure PG-13 is fine for now. *nudge nudge* Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 05, 2003 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the scene where Ran tripped into bed and Youji wouldn't let him go right away. So good ^_^ I liked when Youji called Aya a "good little boy" as well. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max On: January 05, 2003 22:36 CST
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What da ya mean take awhile to update?!?!? ::glares:: I told you I wasn't patient! ::sighs in defeat:: Oh fine! But I hope that the next chapter is longer! You really have me hooked on this ya know.
Oh well, hope school doesn't keep you too busy (I know it will me). Now hurry up with the next chapter all ready! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 04, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeh, he didn't find out yet! *laughs* The next chapter will be fun, sleeping in the same bed, hehe. -^^- |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 16:26 CST
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This really is a very cute, sweet story. Give us more. :) |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 04:44 CST
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*smiles* The snoring bit was funny. Poor Ran, probably getting harassed by Yohji's feet. Thanks for the update. It's too short. As Aisha said, we need more. You've got me hooked in this fic already.
Oh and *wraps your head* don't injured yourself. I need you clear-headed to continue the story. *smirk* |
Reviewed By: alternative On: January 04, 2003 00:21 CST
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This is so cute and funny plz update as soon as possible! I can't wait until Yohji finds out his bride is a man.. lol |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max On: January 04, 2003 00:17 CST
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AAAAhhhh!!!!! That was too short!!!! And now I have to be patient and wait for another one! I'm not patient!!! ::pouts:: Okay so I'll wait. Update soon! I'll be watching for it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Merigold [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 22:47 CST
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Ooooooooooo! I want Yohji to find outtttttt... I guess I'll have to wait a bit... Write! Write! This is GREAT! |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 14, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I squealed when I read the "I went shopping with your sister.." line. Youji is very observant it seems. Crossdressing Ran's are so fun! *huggles* I would love to read more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! This is so incredibly sweet and fun to read. Thankyou. You made Ran so cute, no wonder Yohji kept calling him cutie. I love this idea by the way and definitely would love to read more. |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max On: January 01, 2003 18:09 CST
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That was a cruel place to leave it on. I really do hope you update very soon because I'm dieing to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Merigold [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 13:01 CST
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Eeeeeeeeeee! You updated! Yay! This is good stuff ^^ I hope Yohji responds well, Taketori's such an ass. ^^ |
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