| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jackie On: February 21, 2003 22:42 CST
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LOL this is really funny i like it!!! write mooooore!!! |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:54 CST
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okay, u made me smile again! Oh Schu is so evil. *L* wonder what plans he got for dear Ayachan. Is Yohji going to tell Ran that he knows his little secret soon? *pokes* and dont mind the OOC, its AU anyway so it doesnt matter. :) |
Reviewed By: simply_kim [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
heeey! This chapter's one hell of enjoyable stuff! Good job! ^___^ I hope you'll post the next parts soon! ^_^
hugs,
Simply Kim ^_^ |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 19:39 CST
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Are you going to have Schuldig and Aya-chan get together? I thought she was involved with Ken which was why she didn't want to get married in the first place.
When is Yoji going to let Ran know that he knows his "cutie" is a cute guy and not girl?
I'm not worried about the OOCness of this fic since it is an alternate universe as you say. |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: February 15, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah it's great great great what else could it be^^...but I want that Yohji find out about the secret of Ran^^ soon...PLEEEEAAAASEEEEEE...or does he knows it yet O_O.
Anyways...wonderful kawaii and sweet story...I LOVE IT^^...GO GO GO!!!!
Ja *MMMMOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEE*
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 18:00 CST
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YAY! You've updated! *sweatdrop* You're not going to tell us who that person is, are ya?
And it's... so short -_- *shrugs* oh well, they're married.
Poor Aya/Ran... ;_; and poor Youji >:D but it's still too short, but still good. Keep updating them!!! Is it getting to a greater part? ^________^ Please continue!!! PLEEEEEEEEAAAASEEEE!!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 17:46 CST
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WAAAII!!! Why did you stop?!! NO!!! THAT WAS SO CUTE!! Ahem ^_^' sorry
Okay another guessing thing. Hmmm.. who might that be *doing thinking pose* Is it Nagi? *checking WK photos* Because he's not on your list of "they-can-not-be-this-strange-person" *smack myself with a mallet* NO! That can't be. Stupid guess! So let's see... Birman? XD err... should that stranger be a woman or a guy?
Ugh... I give up with the guessing if that stranger-is-a-woman... I'll stick with Nagi XP
Err... -_-U I think I overreacted up there... good chapter. WRITE MORE! KEEP SENDING THEM!!! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 19:07 CST
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I missed a LOT of chapter updates it seems! EEEK! The wedding doeth fast approach. I died laughing when Ran suddenly realized what would happen on the wedding NIGHT.
I look forward to the time when Yohji discovers the truth - or, if Schu is right and he's not as stupid as he looks - reveals that he already knows the truth. |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 20:07 CST
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The jilted lover of Yoji's? ... hmm... Asuka? Birman? Manx? Just how long can Aya old on to this charade? |
Reviewed By: LadyDragon (to lazy to log in) On: February 08, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah my guess is Noi/Neu of Schreint. Dont know why, but I suspect its her. Anyway great chapter, but they're so short!! |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: February 08, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*winces* Ack! I almost pity Crawfish! I hope it's not Nagi! Hm, prehaps Asuka/Neu? Or Maki?... |
Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: February 09, 2003 12:32 CST
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Well, my guess is Sakura. Is it her?
Don't stop here! Continue! |
Reviewed By: Randi On: February 09, 2003 15:35 CST
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oh, I need more this is good *^_^* It's my fav fic, so maybe if I bribe you with chocolates you will write more? Cookies perhaps? I wanna hear the mystery person tell Aya about "Youji's old escapades" ::sniffles:: I will just have to wait. |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: February 03, 2003 00:38 CST
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Yes! You actually have Schu's eye color right! They are blue, but most people say they are green. They look green sometimes, but they're BLUE! Hehe...anyway, another good chapter! Schu is such a know-it-all. Good for Aya for smacking him. I hope Schu doesn't hurt her for it. ;_; Is Ran going to start feeling anxious and worried because his secret will be found out? He can't keep it forever...I think Yohji already knows, but I still wonder what his reaction will be, and what Ran's reaction will be to his reaction! ..does Ran know two boys can be together in that way? Does he even suspect that might happen? *squeals* I need to read more! @_@ |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 04:34 CST
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*sigh* ok, here comes the "Schuldig-has-green-eyes-fraction" *damn, why didn't I just ignore it and wrote green *sigh* I was convinced, they were green, till I got here: http://www.thenoodlebowl.com/schuldig/fandom.html#fannon
so.....they ARE blue... or maybe it's just something with my eyes...-_-° oh and I could swear, I wrote "seven eyes" and not "seven pairs of eyes" -_- youji has 2, omi has 2, ran has 2 and farfie has one. now go and count again... and, yes, the night after the wedding WILL be interesting XD. And I haven't forgotten, that Aya is engaged, don't worry.. XD. |
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