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"Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ]
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 Reviewed By: sandy  On: August 06, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how wonderful I think Shadows is. It is so great! You are an amazing author. Everyday I come home from work and check to see if there is any new updates from “ nekojita chan”, be it Shadows, your Violet Eyes series, or any of your other shorts. I am both happy and sad to know Shadows is almost done. I am hoping that after a break, you decide to continue with the hints you have given throughout and continue it as a series or sequel. Thank you for hours of enjoyment. You really have great story lines.
 Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2003 01:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, when are you and I going to tye the knot, Neko-chan? My resolve to marry you has increased after that lovely bit of writing. Oh, how I cheered at Yohji's punishment for Masafumi! Mmmm... And Ken becoming a bound! Brilliant! And crazy psycho Jei! And- Oh, just everything! It all makes me squeal with joy and do happy dances!! Dear GOD I love you!!! *glomps and huggles tightly* X3
 Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2003 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! YOU!!! I'M GONNA KILL YOU!!!!! * punches her and kicks her and sends a horde of rabid cross dressing Farfs after her* Oh, oh we're gonna fight, and ya know what? YA KNOW WHAT! ......your gonna win....* sobs* I just can't get myself to hurt you * sniffle* because then * sniff* I wouldn't have you wonderful stories to fawn over and obsess over... So instead, I'll force feed you boiling water, yup you heard me. Boiling water, and laugh, maniacally * starts to laugh* I'll laugh and taunt you and your "cat's tongue* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! .......So you better update this, or I'll track you down...oh yes, and not only will I bring my flock of rabid cross dressing Farfs, they be carrying kettles of boiling water * glare*
 Reviewed By: Ale  On: July 31, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is WONDERFUL!! I can't wait for it to finish... you do everyone's charachter wonderfully and it's very refreshing because everything's so well written.
Can't Wait for more! Good Luck!
 Reviewed By: soxykitty  On: July 31, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic is really one of the most creative and well written fics I've read. I'm enjoying it emensely and please update soon. You did everyones character very well and I can't wait till the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 29, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffs* *lip trembles* this is getting so sad!!! i don't want any of them to die!!!!! please, PLEASE!!!! don't dissappoint me and kill any of them--i'll be in tears and depressed for a week! i knew you were going to make the whole staff of the Koneko want to go, damn good thing you only made two of 'em go! but still!! *worried glance* i hope everyone makes it out of this ok!!

i almost want to say that, with the way you write you'd never kill your characters, but then i might jinx myself and you will end up killing them! please don't. please???? *begs you with the biggest, wateriest (is that a word?) most innocent (couldn't think of an 'est' word for that one) puppy-dog eyes imagionable*
 Reviewed By: Mahtab  On: July 25, 2003 03:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo. the last few chapters were breath taking!
 Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2003 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, since i didn't actually finish reading this last chapter before i posted my last review (i just wanted to be the 100th reviewer *grins*) i'll review properly now. =^_^=

heh... of course that is if i can find anything suitable to say... *thinks* *frowns*

ok, not really, but i did want to voice how well you write your 'secondary characters' such as Lady Meara--i like her a lot--and Botan, Cass, and everyone else--god you do such an amazing job at developing yours and the other characters! wonderful--just wonderful! =^_~=
 Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2003 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHH--YOU UPDATED!!!!!! *glomps you and huggles you to death* uh-er--sorry....

*does happy dance* i'm so excited you update--hey that rhymed... anyway, i'm shaking i'm so nervous about the upcoming 'battle' i hope everyone makes it out unscathed--except for all the asses who hurt poor Aya-kun! *sighs* i love you--you're such an outstanding artist!!! more soon, please!
 Reviewed By: Kurai  On: July 17, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
..WOW..I've just read the first 2 chapters, but its very very good! I'll be back to read the rest ... though I don't know when I'll ever finish it... *so very long, I love long running stories* My friend loved it so much so I decided to read it too (I haven't really watched or read Weiss Kreuz so I don't really read those fics, but I intend to, they are just way to HOT to not watch) This story is really very good, I dont want to stop reading now, but I have to sleep cause I have to get up early tomorrow ... or today. *its 3am* Well, good night! -__-Zzzz
*oh and don't think I gave the rating as All 10 all the time, I think this is the first time I've giving 10 on all 5 of them, so really, I really like this, and its really written very well*
 Reviewed By: ~kyou  On: July 16, 2003 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, well, I was to send you a nicely long letter about the whole Violet Eyes arc incident, and then maybe another about this great fic, but hey, I'm lazy. So for now, I just wanted to say I LOVE this fic. I can't find flaws in it, and I love the way you've portrayed all the charas here. I love this fic's Jei! Also the story. Hope you keep posting!!
 Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2003 22:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*claps* *bows and stands up next to Omni-sama* i'm right there with you my friend--if you hadn't already claimed this wonderful artist--i'd have taken her already! er--well that, and i'm not all that straight and i'm a guy... =^_^=

i don't know what to say--this fic has been the most outstanding, emotional and action-filled peice of ART i have ever seen in my life!!!! it's absolutely marvelous, but, then again, i always say that.... there aren't words to describe the magnificence of this wonderful fiction--you shall be remembered for all time!

*bows to 'Jita-chan, then blows kiss and winks*
 Reviewed By: red  On: July 11, 2003 18:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me like. Me like very much!!
 Reviewed By: Lachesis [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, after my ridiculously long previous review, I leave town for a couple weeks and come back to find THIS. Oooh! So great! Virtually everything that I hoped to see after finishing _bargains_ was here. I'm still quite delirious with happiness right now. ^_^

I'm glad to see SchuSchu returning to his utterly charming, look-at-how-much-of-an-asshole-i-am personality. ^_^ Aya's incessant biting gave me a fit of the giggles. Nasty little kage isn't he? So so cute, and so pretty!

I usually don't read PWPs unless they have some other redeeming quality, so you can tell that I'm not a rabid lemon fan. I prefer to take citrus when it's woven into an engaging plot.

But...wow. This is just...well...hot.

From Aya and Yohji's alternately cute and beautifully written sexcapades throughout to Masato and Schuldig's utterly screwy (no pun intended) strangely hilarious and very very sexy battle between bedsheets (look at me! i know alliteration!), just...i love you!

This review is blatantly not very constructive, but I'm on a high from this chapter, and the fic in general. I'm blaming my overdose of energy, giggles, warm and fuzzy feelings, and tendency to insert frenetic, nonsensical statements in the middle sentences on you. I'll try to get something more coherent and constructive in come next chapter.

There's only one thing running through my empty little head right now:

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!
 Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2003 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Guess Cassandra was right, Schu DID meet his match!

As for the joining between Aya and Yohji this time around - WOW. That was incredibly...well, for lack of better words, HOT. Holy cow.

I am eager to see how the switching of the sphere plan pans out, as the time for its implementation is fast approaching.

Aya's and Nagi's casual observation that Masato and Schu might be mates was both apt and humorous. I'm glad Yohji is finding it in his heart to forgive Schu.

And finally Omi and Nagi get "a little" - heh. The two of them are simply adorable, even though they have so much responsibility on their shoulders.

I bow down to your muse for continuing to imbue the story with so many facets, and on a dang regular basis, too!
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