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Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 10:29 CDT
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*cries* You left if hanging -there-? Sooo mean. Meh. I guess it just means I have a lot to look forward to in the next chapter. *grumpily pouts a bit then perks up* ^_^ The ancestry of Botan and his daughter is a nice twist. It's nice to see Cassandra happy, too. *sits back and twiddles her thumbs for another two weeks* At least you're being regular about updates, ne? |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 18:01 CDT
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^__^ Finally, a break, and a chapter that has more answers than questions. Although, the few questions are doosies. I'm looking forward to a heartfelt Nagi/Omi scene, but I'll probably have to wait patiently for it, ne? I love this fic. Thank you for putting so much effort into it! |
Reviewed By: Karla On: May 21, 2003 08:59 CDT
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Thrilling. enjoyed it very much. hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 15:20 CDT
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"There had never been a pairing between a succubae-bound and a kage before. For two such possessive and protective people to have found each other and become mates... he had a feeling Harpers like Koyu would be writing songs about the two for centuries to come... if they lived that long." *grins and nods* And the bard is doing exceptionally well. Thanks for the info on the wards and the timeline. Hmmm... Ken and Yuriko disappeared. The were heading to the Koneko, but I suppose they'll reach there later in the night in the next chapter. I'm glad that things will be moving ahead now that Yohji and Aya have talked about Asuka and Aya-chan. They can start making plans in the morning, but I'm worried about Kikyou's new plan... the little weasel. And, I'm wondering who that Guard is. |
Reviewed By: drgnspk On: May 03, 2003 07:41 CDT
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Your story makes it worth it to wait for mm.org to load. Thanks for the great story. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 06:25 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter. Manx! What are you thinking, naming Kikyo as Captain of the Guards???
Love Omi's explanation of the Fujimiya estate to Nagi. Another piece to the intricate puzzle!
Kuyo's unintrusive personality played well against Aya's reclusive nature.
Even Botan's budding relationship with Cassandra was nicely done - not heavy handed at all.
Each chapter is wonderfully done, well worth the wait, and makes me eagerly await the next! |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 03:04 CDT
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Wahoo! You updated. *squeals with delight* It's good that Aya's getting used to people and being outside. Yohji needs to get him to hope, though, I don't know how he'll do that. I also wonder if Yohji'll be approached to take the place of Captain... although it was commented that his behavior for the past year may have tarnished his reputation. The Botan/Cassandra romance is cute! Did Naoe/Aya not know that Aya's old home was still standing? If Aya claims it (and the money) then..... *smiles as she sees a happy future in store for Aya and his mate* |
Reviewed By: Sandy On: April 11, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great fic. If you are a Aya/Yohji fan, this is for you. A great fantasy story even for those who usually don't like fantasy stories. I can't wait for more, but don't want it to end! Don't miss all the other Nekojita-chan's Weiss stories. They are the best! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 16:09 CDT
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yahoo, another great chapter ^_^ so you're putting this on hold? does that mean you're going to finish Bleed?
Mara |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 15:30 CDT
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Liked this one as much as the others... ;)
Still feel sorry for Schuschu, but I hope that his mate shows up soon and I'm really curious about who it is too...
Anyway, great work as usual! :D |
Reviewed By: LadyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 15:18 CDT
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Another wonderful cahpter. I'm curious now, who the heck is Schuldig's mate? *_* I cant wait!! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. What a delightful treat, to have two new chapters in such a short period of time!
The arrival of Omi's half brothers was inevitable, I suppose. Poor Aya! The vivid description really conveyed his pain and lengths that Hirofumi went to.
Love the whole Schu/Masato thing. Poor Yotan! The line Schu uttered about how he got "the Prick" and Yohji got the sexy bastard (paraphrasiing it nonverbatim, of course) was hysterical.
You nicely gave some glimpses of humor in with the otherwise very dark chapter.
I absolutely loved the scene where Aya and Yohji were livid with rage and completely protective of each other when Masato arrived. Aya's inability to calm down really showed how very much Yohji means to him.
Incredibly vivid descriptions, excellent plot advancement, and more suspense. What more could one ask for? |
Reviewed By: Chanchan On: April 09, 2003 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't you write a fic that isn't entertaining and addictive so I can get some sleep!? (Stomps off muttering about kages, bounds, addiction to Nekojita_chan's fics and lack of sleep.) |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 14:29 CDT
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Whee! Thanks for Crawford's recap on the events to come. I'm looking forward to reading more whenever you have the chance to post again. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: katzchen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:31 CDT
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Yay! you updated! i've been reading this fic for a while now, but am too lazy to review.. eh, sorry. it's good though!! very very very good!! addictive too :) i laughed so hard when i figured out that Yohji was a bound, hehe, brilliant. keep it up! |
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