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Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 20:45 CST
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new chapter!!! i want >. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 14:07 CST
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hum so when are we getting this part two of Machinations?
Mara |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you're the first person I've given a perfect rating to... o_o
Anyway, I just wanted to express my love of this story. Granted, Nagi reminds me more of Goku from Saiyuki now, but... Um... Yeah. I also like how you worked in your original characters from your other arc. Cassandra is my favorite. Then again, I may be a bit partial since she and I share the same name... And because the myth that the name comes from is most likely my favorite (and I'm a MAJOR myth freak). But, the character herself is very cool. I want to hug her! ^.^
Ok, now keep dishing this wonderful writing out. *claps hands* Chop chop! You mustn't keep your adoring fans waiting! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 14:17 CST
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yay! new chapter! oooh i can't wait til you post part two!
Mara |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no! no, its not too long--its not long enough! the next part soon!! now that i've actually caught up with this, i want it--BAD!! *grins* this si such a wonderful fic--i hope something happens soon, wan those a-hole Takatories and all those other jerks to die and i want Aya-chan to be safe soon--poor Ran has suffered enough. the development in this fic is absolutely wonderful though... so, need i say more for you to continue? =^_^= |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*peeks up from behind the screen*
You know... I really hate to rush you, but I would really, really, really like to read another chapter... :) Feels a bit like I'm stalking you or something, but I really love this one (like you haven't figured it out already... ;) and I need to read more of it! :)
Oh yes, if my begging-nekojita-to-finish-up-another-chapter-reviews are bothering you I'll stop, I promise! :) I just want to let you know how much I like your stories! ;)
/The Mighty MiniMorr |
Reviewed By: Malakeh On: March 17, 2003 09:49 CST
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oh this fic is great. I had a wonderful weekend reading it. |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 22:30 CST
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Poor Omi... but I guess he's learned his lesson now. More Omi/Naoe later, 'kay? Hmmm.... I'm wondering if there was a deeper reason for Aya pulling away from Koyu or if it was just too many people for him. Poor Aya and Yohji. They're never going to have an uninterrupted morning, are they? *chuckles* I'm also wondering why Aya didn't voice his desire to go to a bookstore. I can understand his urge to keep the visit to Cassandra secret, but surely there's nothing wrong with books. And the fact that he didn't speak up, means that he hasn't healed... and not that I'm expecting him to be 100% or even 50% better, but... *sighs* Also, I'm wondering when Yohji will learn that he's a bound. I'm looking forward to the next chapter... and to a confrontation between Yohji and Ken, perhaps? |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 15:16 CST
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Hmmmm... You know, in my world, it's been 'a day or two' now... :) Care to feed a starving MiniMorr the rest of that chapter? Pretty please with a little sugar on top? :) |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 21:38 CST
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yay! a new chapter! you know, it's so strange to read one of yor fics where Koyu isn't blind. not bad strange, just... strange. and the scene with teddy in their bedroom was priceless! one of the things i like most about your writing is how you can keep humor solidly in and still describe things beautifully and manage to switch between serious content and humorous. it's a great skill to have and you've mastered it better than most, in my opinion. i'm looking forward to part two of this chapter! ^_^
Mara |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! :D Another chapter!!! Hope that you get the next part up real quick, please? :D
And I still would like to see Cassandra and Crawford together... ;)
Anyway, I even bribed my brother off the computer so that I could read it in peace and I really hope that the next part will be up soon - I think I like this one best of all the stories you've written that I've read! :)
Keep up the good work! :) |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 20:30 CST
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this was such a great story. i've read all of your fanfics on your website and you haven't let me down in my expectations with this one so far! you're quite an amazing writer, better than quite a few professional authors with books out there on the shelves. i hope this isn't the end, i'm lookingforward to seeing an update soon.
Mara |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 07:27 CST
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PHEW! (fanning self)
The development of Yohji and Aya's relationship is complex and steamy.
Everyone has secrets, and each of them is delightful.
I almost cringe (in a wickedly amused way) at the thought of Teddy's arrival in the near future.
The ending of Chapter 4 was...wow. Crawford's warning to Schu just cracked me up. I guess he wasn't kidding, eh?
The emotional and physical relationships between your characters are well written, and I always look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crawford and Cass? :) Would LOVE to see him grovel before her!!! >:)
Really loved this chapter too and can't wait for the next!
And thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with the rest of us! :) |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 16:37 CST
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Mmmm... that was nice. I'm curious to see how Omi's night turned out. The father/son interplay of the precog and the thief was fun. I'm also wondering about Yohji's father, Kikyou (lol... you've made Kikyou a -he-), and the ring. Another great chapter. ^_^ Keep at it! |
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