| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 10, 2003 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma loves to push her luck with Vegeta, doesn't she? Pinching his butt was cute, though. I loved this story at FFN and can't wait to read the completed version here. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 20:27 EST
Comment/Review:
O_O Bulma's not going to very happy in the morning is she? Oh well, her pinching his ass was pretty funny. Update soon please |
Reviewed By: Bulma75 On: January 09, 2003 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, I have read this before :) Its a good story..btw there is a spelling error, the first time vegeta says "you're drunk, woman" you have "dunk" :) chao |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 22:12 EST
Comment/Review:
awsome so far keep going |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: March 21, 2003 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: G>J> On: February 09, 2003 21:23 EST
Comment/Review:
YES finally this site is up to the part i last read, so please update soon cuz i've been waiting 4ever 2 see what will happen next! |
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