| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kat On: February 23, 2003 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeah! You updated! I really liked this chapter. I can't wait for more!!!! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 23, 2003 19:33 EST
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If Bulma is really as smart as she always proclaims to be, then Vegeta's words should sink in and make her realise that all Jet has been doing is trying to win a woman with just mere cliques.
Bulma and Vegeta definitely had something very real between them before Bulma's hurtful words and demands for him to never be a part of Trunks' life, was what made Vegeta sever the tie they had, (which was entirely her fault because she never let him have a chance to tell his side of the event and by the time she heard it from Future Trunks is was too late), and she again blames him for feeling lonely.
If Bulma looks back on what she and Vegeta shared before the end of the Cell Games, she'll realise what they shared was very real and meaningful, and the foundation of it wasn't done by cliques, but rather by real feelings.
If Bulma thinks long enough, she'll realise that what Trunks said to her before she left, and what Vegeta said once she got home were both entirely true. If she didn't have any feelings for Vegeta, she would never have allowed him to use her body like that and let him fly off into space like he had originally requested, and if she didn't have feelings for Vegeta, Trunks would never have been born. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I'm really enjoying this soo far. I could see some of the conversations happening. It's kinda funny. Keep up the good work :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD ! this was so so ok I havent got the words u make me cry what is it with u people U made me cry all the time!!! *except the lemons they make me smile* AHEM well um yeah ! and and I cant wait for the next installment UPDATESOONN!
By the way before I forget when is the next lemon going to be? *smirks*
Later! :p |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 21, 2003 01:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it!! I hope Bulma says "yes" just to see what Veggie-kins will do. Jet sounds like a great guy (probably a homocidal maniac behind closed doors ^_^), and Bulma should be loved and pampered, but it's Veggie she should be with. Great chap!! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 23:26 EST
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EPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP cliff hangers are evil. oye oye poor veggie i'd be worried if i didn't know for a fact that they get togather in the end. please cont. soon |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 13:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, what will Bulma do? I don't want Jet to turn out to be a slease, but we all know he and Bulma can't end up together.... AHHHH! Update, update, soon, soon!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 18, 2003 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don't update soon I'll.....
I'll....
*snorts* Who am I kidding? I won't do a damn thing. But please get the next chapter out as soon as possible. I love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next! :) |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 10:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for this chapter since FOREVER!
Excellent Fic and I love the way you wrote the meeting between the two rivals! Waiting for the next chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ying=chan On: February 17, 2003 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why HIM? WHAT ABOUT Geta? still real good though. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 On: April 09, 2003 21:01 EDT
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Well worth the ride. Another great story by one of the greatest B/V Authors out there... |
Reviewed By: G>J> On: February 17, 2003 14:39 EST
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THIS IS EVIL
I hope you update soon after leaving it on a cliff like that. Anywayz glad i got to read a new chapter.
GR8 job on it! |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 16, 2003 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fucking hate JET!! So much mushy stuff FUCK U Jet! All BUlma needs is her prince the rough , sexy, yummy ouji! no so troll asshole ! Oh boy *ahem* Im sorry anywhoo I love the fic I cant wait for the next chap *hopes that there is some jet killing in it* So yeah where was I keep up the good work I love all ur fics !
Later! and Oh yeah before I forget when its the next citrus B/V? *hentai grin* Ok yeah BYE! :D |
Reviewed By: Brit On: February 16, 2003 21:49 EST
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hey. just wanted to say i love this fic! please keep on writing. and thanx for spending your precious time to write us such a wonderful fic. please make a new chap. soon. bye bye |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 21:45 EST
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Gaahhh! What are you doing ending it there? Get back to the computer and write!!!! |
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