| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 00:52 EST
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mmmmmmm nice one as always.... ah the joy of ruts |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, that was a very hot lemon! And I love how Vegeta was a virgin ... that's so sweet! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:57 EST
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Damn! That must have been some night for her to need a senzu in the morning!! Heh heh. I love it. Can't wait until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 02:32 EST
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droool...... nice lemon.....mmmm veggie |
Reviewed By: Star On: January 25, 2003 00:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, that was pretty hot and smoking. Let the rut begin. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 23:42 EST
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Woohoo! (Jumps up and down whistling and cheering) Yeah! It has begun! Can't wait until next time! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 23:11 EST
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Ugh..get on with it already!! Must have more! Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 21:58 EST
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awsome! can't wait for the rut chapter muahha |
Reviewed By: Jita'sQueen On: January 22, 2003 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story....it's one of my favorites EVER! I recomend everyone to read it, it totally kicks ass. Keep up the good work lavender, and thanx for the e-mail updates. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 23:19 EST
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whoo can't wait for next one please post soon |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 16:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN YOU JUST UPDATE ALL THE OTHER CHAPTERS NOW SO I CAN READ THEM ALL? Sorry. This is what happens when I can't control myself. Hurry with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Akana On: January 21, 2003 10:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting good now.... |
Reviewed By: capra124 On: January 20, 2003 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is just getting better and better. I can't wait to see how this all works out. And with Vegeta's rut beginning in less than 24 hrs too....it's gonna be good. Once those two FINALLY figure things out, it'll be even better. And the fact that they both had the same dream, at about the same time, HAS to be a sign of some kind. But of what? And will those two ever know that they had the exact same dream, at about the exact same time? |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 03:38 EST
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ohhhhh post more soon pleeeease |
Reviewed By: Busta R. On: January 19, 2003 11:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always wondered how these two got together. Now we know... =p |
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