| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gina On: March 29, 2003 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhm.. well. Vegeta is the correct spelling I think someone else said that but I'm not sure. Uhm the last chapter.. there.. uhm.. yea.. I think that's wrong cause.. makes no sense. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 29, 2003 13:22 EST
Comment/Review:
I think you accidentally added the wrong chapter to this story. I read "he truth comes Out" on the Ward.
Oh by the way I love both stories. I'm looking forward to more updates. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD I LOVED ITTT!!! *SNIIFFF* Please BULMA SAY YES AND BOND WITH HIMMM !
I love this fic ohhhhhh! *SOB*
The dream idea was greaaat! I loved it !
I just hope things get better and Bulma sends Jet packing!
Anywhoo UPDATER SOON AND GIVE ME SOME LLEMONNN! Pretty PLEASE!!!
Later! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 09, 2003 21:24 EST
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When will that stubborn Bulma ever learn?! Why can't she see that the solid foundation of true love cannot be made with mere stereotypic displays like buying food and flowers.
Someone really needs to force a reality pill down Bulma's throat to make her see that Vegeta is stripping his pride bare to admit his feelings for her through his heritige. If she refuses to go and see him through the night, then it shows that she is insulting him and his culture, something that Vegeta treasures dearly. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 20:40 EST
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Ohhh.... *grins* Can't wait too read the next chapter. i hope bulma does go to vegeta, cause that would mean a lemon chapter would be very soon :D Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: March 09, 2003 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! It was worth the waiting!! Completly!!! but PLEASE!! update a little sooner i'm sure all your readers agree when I said.. WE NEED YOU!! you don't know how terrible it was when i checked everyday and yo hadn't updated :'( pleaaseeee
CONGRATS IT'S MY FAVORITE CHAPTER EVER ^^
hUGS!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Holy guacamole!! That's not your typical sex dream! ha ha. Poor Bulma. That's alot to be thrown at someone within such a short amount of time. But I love it!
Go Vegeta!!! *jumps up and cheers* It's about damn time he came to his senses! |
Reviewed By: bise b On: March 09, 2003 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! PLEASE NEW CHAPTER SOON! PLEASE.. I LOVE THIS FIC! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2003 00:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit Vegeta made alot of sense. As much as Jet loves Bulma, the bottom line is that she's not in love with him. Vegeta comforted her the best way he knew how but I think it'll take more to convince her that marrying Jet would be a big mistake. My favorite line? I know what passion looks like in your eyes Bulma, because I saw it when you were with me". Wow! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:32 EST
Comment/Review:
Can you pwease update soon *gives puppydog eyes*, pwease? |
Reviewed By: BogusRed On: March 03, 2003 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 17 was a great chapter. I got teary eyed when Vegeta said not to waist any more time on him and then Bulma fell into his arms. I can't wait for the next chapter ^.^ Write more chapters like 17 |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 23:01 EST
Comment/Review:
wow...... epppppp post more soon |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: February 24, 2003 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very insightful, very enjoyable fic! I'm lovin'it!
(Excellent grammar and spelling to boot!) You certainly know how to set a mood. The emotions are palpable! Write On! |
Reviewed By: Onna On: February 24, 2003 10:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely the best chapter so far.
I.Loved.It. ^^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 00:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I never thought Vegeta could be so insightful! very nice. can't wait to see what's next! |
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