| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2011 17:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I love this story. |
Reviewed By: saiyan_gerl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story took a little getting used to for me when I first started reading it but before I knew it I could not stop reading! The rut was an excellent story idea! I think that just built up so much anticipation for the hot lemon scene and that was definitely a very HOT lemon scene! I LOVED it! Sooo angsty!!! I usually don't prefer stories with these so-called Saiyan bonding rituals but your writing and your story was so good I was able to overlook that and still truly enjoy that!
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Reviewed By: Neafiir [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 19:15 EDT
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Perfection. Read this so many times, and I'll read it again. I have nothing else to say other than utter perfection. I wouldn't change a single thing. I hope you carry on writing, I'm hooked on your fics!
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Reviewed By: Laura Awakenelda On: August 23, 2005 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. This is the third time I've read it and it's STILL amazing and I seriously love it with all my heart. This has got to be the realest portrayel of Vegeta EVER. The way it's written, you just capture his whole being perfectly, he just seems so real and his whole character is so DEEP, its just absolutely out of this world! Thank you so much for writing this!!
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Reviewed By: veggienaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first off i have been looking for this story for months!! who knows if its been months, i have lost track of time! sorry i'm sounding like a freak but its just that i've been searching for so long! i read this story the first time and it was *awesome* but then one day i rememebered a story about a rut and i was like 'i have to read that!' but alas i couldnt find it! yes im rambling, but i am just so glad! i have finally found this story again!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kchocopie On: October 22, 2004 19:23 EDT
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Omg, I love this story! I almost cried at several points in this story! I love it to death, it's your best story by far!
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Title: caramelheart
Reviewed By: caramelheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Falling in Love the Second Time first and this fic filled in some spaces that the second one left. It was so sweet! Great fic!
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Reviewed By: eljoebla On: April 09, 2003 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic i just finished get out the third part to surviving togethor out soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 00:05 EDT
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waaaaaiiiii so sweet i loved it *sniffels* right more fics! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS OVERRRR!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *cries loud*!
Omg I loved this story just like the other one .You are an exelent writer.Really your work is Flawless I love it and I cant stop reading it DAMN I TTT!!! Please please I need ST3 soon Im dying!!!
Later! *sniff then screams WHYY* |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Touching! Wonderful! Awesome!
Uh, running out of adjectives here...
That was a great ending to a great story. I loved the park argument. Ha ha. I laughed when I read it in the other one. |
Reviewed By: silver-eyed-Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww cute ending and I have been waiting forever for it |
Reviewed By: silver-eyed-Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:59 EST
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WHAT??? DID I MISS SOMTHING MAJOR HERE???
i think you posted a chapter from another story cause that DOES NOT fit in with the plot PLEASE FIX IT OR TELL ME WHAT I MISSED |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: April 03, 2003 01:52 EST
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Cool, cool, cool, and also fantastic. That has got to be the best chapter yet. Although I don't want to see this story end, I am eager to read the final chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 02:10 EST
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i'm so confused @_@ did you post the wrong chapter maybe.... i mean one moment they bonded the next chapter is full of people i never heard of..... |
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