| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saki On: February 16, 2003 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Say yes Bulma! Have that idiot Vegeta all worried and angry over her engagement. That would be killer. I love Bulma and Vegeta and want them to get back together, but I just like to see Vegeta suffer for some reason. Great chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 16, 2003 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She'd better not marry him! Nice chapter. Can't wait for an update. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 16, 2003 21:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!! I have been waiting so long for this chapter to come out. Even before you started posting here. I can just imagine what will happen! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 21:10 EST
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Aaahhh, you evil, evil.....well I did see the cliffy coming so I'll shut up. Well, this is going to be interesting. can't wait til next time. |
Reviewed By: capra124 On: February 23, 2003 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. When Bulma wakes, how's she gonna feel....about Vegeta....his actions, his statements about her, Jet, even himself; about Jet...his proposal, her feelings for him.....
And what about Vegeta? The thoughts going through his head about what he said and did the night before, as well as his own feelings about the situation, about Bulma.....it's gonna be interesting to say the least.....OH and then there's Trunks. Will Bulma tell him or won't she? If she does, how's he going to react? If she doesn't, and he still finds out, how's he going to react? Will he overreact and throw a tantrum or will he find other methods to get his feelings known?
Can't wait to see where things go from here....... |
Reviewed By: faye On: February 09, 2003 02:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fanfic is good, i can't wait to read the next chapter,although i think that maybe there is a big gap between the birth if trunks and the death of Cell in which we do not know anything about our favourite couple ¬_¬ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 19:56 EST
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NOOOOOO! You're so mean leaving us hanging like that! Heh heh I liked the flashback. that was good. can't wait to see how things go btwn vegeta and jet. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 10, 2003 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaaaaaaaaaase update soon. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen between the two... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2003 13:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect chap. Looks like Veggie's refusal to be Bulma's man is gonna bite him in the ass. I think Jet is gonna ask her to marry him. I hope she says yes just to see what monkey boy will do. Damn, Trunks is only 5 and he has more of a clue than his dad O_o. Great job!! |
Reviewed By: amber_waves On: February 10, 2003 13:23 EST
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OMG! That "declaration" in the flashback by Bulma was sweltering! Okay, I'm dying here... what is Veg going to do? Man this is getting good! |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 10, 2003 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant chapter. Like all of Vegeta's angst and anxiousness. Vegeta is such an idiot! He'd drive anyone to drink. Now maybe another man in Bulma's life will kick him into gear. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 22:31 EST
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ahhhh......... darn interloper.... *envision chibi veggies beating jet with a mallet* lol great job can't wait for the next chapt. |
Reviewed By: kainee (kainee1984@yahoo.com) On: February 10, 2003 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!! You DO like torturing Veggie-chan a lot!!!
Mou... Anyway... this seems to be up to where you were on FF.net although I could swear you had more fics up than just these 3... I can't search on FF.net right now to verify this (another reason why I'm checking out Mediaminer sooo much more often than FF.net nowadays...) But really really great job so far. I like how you convey Bulma and Vegeta's emotional states. It's all through dialogue or through action. Which I really approve of... it's really annoying when the author tells you that the character is feeling angsty when it's just more effective to show it. So very very good job on that....
Just update soon! Ack!
*three....
million!
thumbs up!* |
Reviewed By: yaselle On: February 12, 2003 12:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is good! What's gonna happen now? Please don't let us dont and write more soon!! I'm so looking forward to this confrontation. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:41 EST
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whoa.......man holy shit veggie can be an ass sometimess.... oye oye... next chapter soon plleeease |
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