| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: amber waves On: February 07, 2003 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Yeah! This is definately going to be a rocky road! I did read the sequel and am dying to read the rest of this one. I remember that it does take them years to finally be able to talk to each other. And it will finally be nice when it comes! Can't wait! Hurry! :P |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:33 EST
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Oh wow. That was tense. Those two have some serious issues! At least he's staying. Cant wait til next time. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 18:00 EST
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Hurry and Update!!! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 13:02 EST
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Hooray for updates! Keep 'em comming |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 23:21 EST
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ohhh aww man that was sad.... hope trunks makes a differnce poor veggie... can't wait for next chap. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 21:53 EST
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Aw, poor Vegeta. I actually feel sorry for the big lug! Go Mirai! You tell her that he needs to be in their lives! Damn, I sound like a cheerleader or something. O_o Aahh, can't wait to see what's next. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 04:57 EST
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Wow! That's pretty much all I can say right now. How did I miss such an
awesome fanfic? I loved every single word of it. You have such a wonderful style. The tension and interaction you create between Vegeta and Bulma is amazing. I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story! *hugs* Ember |
Reviewed By: Marianne Me. On: February 03, 2003 10:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stubborn jerk Vegeta may be, but that was strangely romantic when he took away her pain and kissed her. Nice. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 19:05 EST
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I hate to see him go, but his parting words were touching, about as sweet as he can be anyway. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 18:23 EST
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epppppp O_O sniff sniff... new chappie soon?? |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 03:14 EST
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ohhhhh i can't wait to see what happens next.. |
Reviewed By: Saki On: January 31, 2003 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Holds up pitchfork to murder Vegeta with* Amazing chapter. Tensions were running high with this one. Terrible thing Vegeta said and acted toward Bulma. But he's naturally an ass and is all talk. He can't live without her! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 31, 2003 21:26 EST
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great chapter. can't wait to see how the new grandparents are gonna take it. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 00:01 EST
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mmm awsome i loved how you ended this one.... lol though my hetai minded wanted more details it was great the way it was |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 29, 2003 23:34 EST
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I liked it. I'm almost scared to see how tense things are going to be later. |
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