| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Veggie's Bitch On: January 15, 2003 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEED MORE OF THIS! ADDICTED TO FALLING IN LOVE... |
Reviewed By: Tonya Harding On: January 15, 2003 22:41 EST
Comment/Review:
Totally twisted, excellant tale! |
Reviewed By: Star On: January 14, 2003 11:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I hear 70's style porn music when I read chapter 3? Hmm, must just be me. lol. Or could be all that talking about the rut? Anyway, that was an interesting way to handle Vegeta not leaving. Liked it. |
Reviewed By: Lil Brat On: January 13, 2003 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Bulma and Vegeta kill me. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 20:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Bulma playing matchmaker,huh? Ha ha. Scary, really. Vegeta's screwed! Well, maybe not. Oh hell, I'll shut up now! |
Reviewed By: Tonya Harding On: January 12, 2003 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least she apologized. That's big for Bulma. Now poor Vegeta is more confused by her than more than ever. |
Reviewed By: Macy Gray On: January 11, 2003 21:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best stories out there. I've reread this many times and still love it. Dynamite job. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh... Poor Bulma. But even through her drunken state, I don't think she would have done something like that to Vegeta. Anyway, this is a great story, I can't wait to see Bulma's reaction to what she did the next morning! Oh, could you review a story I'm writing called Goku:A New Life on Earth? I need reviews big time, cuz this is my first fic. Thanks, bye! |
Reviewed By: yaselle On: January 10, 2003 12:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! It's back at last. Can't say how happy I am you have decided to post this one (and hopefuly continue it...). I was waiting religiously for the updates when it still was on ff.net, so I'll more than likely do the same here. Compare to most B/V fic out there that try to follow the show timeline, I've always found it was one of the more realistic ones. Can't wait to see how it'll turn out to be. Update soon, please! |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 10, 2003 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma loves to push her luck with Vegeta, doesn't she? Pinching his butt was cute, though. I loved this story at FFN and can't wait to read the completed version here. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 20:27 EST
Comment/Review:
O_O Bulma's not going to very happy in the morning is she? Oh well, her pinching his ass was pretty funny. Update soon please |
Reviewed By: Bulma75 On: January 09, 2003 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, I have read this before :) Its a good story..btw there is a spelling error, the first time vegeta says "you're drunk, woman" you have "dunk" :) chao |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 22:12 EST
Comment/Review:
awsome so far keep going |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: March 21, 2003 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: G>J> On: February 09, 2003 21:23 EST
Comment/Review:
YES finally this site is up to the part i last read, so please update soon cuz i've been waiting 4ever 2 see what will happen next! |
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