| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhmmm...an interesting chapter. I was wondering when we were going to get back to the actual plot. Very creative. I'm liking this story more and more every chapter. I can't wait to read what happends next so don't be away too long! |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 08, 2003 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know.
I love so much your work.
You know. I read "I`ll have lemonade, please" and now "Lemonade, too" is priceless.
You make me laugh so hard that I wake my parents in the next room.
I love it.
Please update soon |
Reviewed By: starr-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best written stories I've seen on mm.org or on ff.net. I absolutly love it and I always enjoy reading it! Please continue, I'd love to see how this all works out. |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep updateing |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: August 02, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta love this fic.
every chapter is just too cool.
sex and comic relief...makes you wonder what
else there is in life.
...that made no sence at all.
keep updating and keep on trucking. |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I wanted to throw up just reading that! Inuyasha doing an Elvis immitaion will now haunt me in my sleep! Don't take this as a flame because it's not. It was actually a very funny and definately original chapter. Your sense of humor just creeps me out sometimes.;)
Can't wait for the next update!(No more Elvis please! Let the poor guy rest in peace!) See you next time. |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
i can't believe you did the wedding from hell. ::highly disturbed from the idea of even human Inuyasha in the Elvis outfit:: |
Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 00:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was horrible!! Poor Kagome!! The image of the wedding will give me nightmares for weeks!! You can't tell me that he thought that was a proper wedding!! And the bedroom? He's got to have more taste than that!! That said, I almost died laughing on the floor. Keep it up, bad taste or not, you know we all need our hanyou!! Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: August 01, 2003 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, an Elvis chapter! That's definately original ^_^ Had a great time reading it, and I loved how Inuyasha gave Kagome a Las Vegas wedding. Every woman's nightmare! hahaha! Hope your lemons can be a little more descriptive, *wink wink nudge nudge* anyhow, I'll be leaving now, and great job on this chapter!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Cat On: August 01, 2003 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job!
And about chapt 10...I nearly died laughing! Yash and his...well...boneheadness.
More! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eventhough I am not a fan of Elvis, this chapter had me doubled over with laughter! I read this chapter through my parted fingers. That is when I didn't have to completely stop from laughing to hard! Leave it to the hanyou who knows everthing to think that he could plan cremony that he knows nothing about. And don't get me started on the room the he so "proudly" redecorated. They should give that room to Kaeda, she is an artist. ( Maybe she'd like it, maybe ) Oh, or would he give it to Miroku and his "Boomarag Butterfly" as pay back for what they did in his car? Hmmmm. I say this because I assume the extra bedrooms will be or were suppose to be for them. ( I am also assuming that 2 bedrooms and 5 bathrooms is a typo ) If I am wrong let me know. I wonder how Yash is going to deal with the Toukijin. And how can you hunt something if your it's prey? And why did he take both fangs if he can only whield one? Why is she just now learning about his "period"? ( *hestarical laughter* )
Thanks for the update. Beautifully written as always. Be looking for the next one.
Peace
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Reviewed By: Yash is FUNNY!! On: August 01, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved it, I couldn't help but laugh! I haven't been much of an Elvis fan, but after I read that, I went onto Limewire and downloaded some of those songs 'cause some of them I haven't heard for a LONG time! And I loved how you put those song titles in with Yash's words. I only have 1 request: make it more lemony! Not to be rude or put you out or anyything, but your latest lemons haven't been all that... inspiring:) |
Reviewed By: Lady Abhorsen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Giggles* I loved the Elvis thing! It was hilarious. Poor Kagome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter Fuji-san |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd... That was.. the worst.. Yash dressing up as Elvis and Kagome in go-go boots... Oh geez... I couldn't stop laughing the entire time I was reading it! I'm still cackling as I type this! I can't stand Elvis, but you made me laugh, so you deserve a... well a much higher number than a ten! Update soon, but no more Elvis, please! Lol!! |
Reviewed By: Zorro On: July 28, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! the lemons are extra sweet!
*don't forget about Sango and Miroku!!!!! Two lemons=x2 sweetness!! |
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