| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:22 CDT
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Hm... Kagome is less out-of-character than I thought. She's so innocent about wanting to meet Sesshoumaru. Catches on quick, but her reactions were dead-on what I'd expect of Kagome ten years later. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:37 CDT
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I can't belive I forgot to put this in my review. I really liked your version of "Marking" it made a lot of sense. Unlike the others I've read this was less painful and the mixing of the scent and auras seems to make more senes than a bite mark. Also, the Marking in this way states the forever bonding that will be detected by any and all demons. Some how I know that this is going to play a big part in the rest of the story. I am also intrieged by the after math of this joining. What will the side effects be....?
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Reviewed By: Babsie On: July 13, 2003 19:23 CDT
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I´ve readed the fic I´ll have lemonade, please...and I love it.
Now...I´m reading Lemonade,too and I have no words to say how much I´m enjoing it.
It´s interesting the way you are rescuing the old problems between Inuyasha and Kagome and put all of this ina a today´s world.
Very good.
Keep doing a great job.
Congratulations. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:25 CDT
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Wow! Dog demons bring a whole new meaning to the words 'horny' and 'desire'. These last two chapters have left me hot and senseless. Words are no good at describing them and it would be a crime to due so. You did a good job, be looking for your next update. Now I am going to go call my boyfriend your writing has given me some fun ideas!
Peace
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds On: July 13, 2003 15:40 CDT
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one word...
WOW |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: July 11, 2003 15:16 CDT
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Wow! That was a great chapter. The first time I read a lemon that was so much based on the rules. I really enjoyed reading this, and congrats again to writing such an awesome fic! ^_^
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 11:13 CDT
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Some word repetition...
I'd been wondering how an independant person like Kag would react to this archaic bit. Not to mention that the details were often quite cool.
I hadn't counted on that trick with the Shikon. If anything, I'd thought it would complicate things in a bad way. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: July 10, 2003 03:57 CDT
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That was a well-written lemon, though I must say I was a tad bit disappointed when I learnt it was a Rin/Sess, y'know? But don't be disappointed, you can't please everyone, right? ^_^ I am a huge fan of your works and even more so of this story. I know I can't WAIT for the Inu/Kag fluff! *wink wink* Please post the next chapter as soon as you can!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice lemon scene with sess and rin...next chapter more yash and kagome fluff eh?
anyways, no death threats, not begging and pleading, all i ask is that you update when you can.
ja! |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 06, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK. I've never read a Sesshy/Rin pairing before and frankly, it was a bit of a shock. I think my problem is the fact that i can't picture her older than what she is in the series. Adding to that it really pissed me off to read Sesshy so dominanent and Rin so freakin submissive it was depressing. HOW COULD SHE BE HAPPY BEING SO BLOODY ACOMIDATING! I'm not flamming you or anything but I'm a girl of the 21st century and that honor and obey stuff don't work well with me! The way you wrote Sesshy is probably the way he would be with Rin and in real life; it's just hate it when reality intrudes on my fantasies with Sesshy.(Pout) Sorry,I will stop now before I take up too much space with my whinning. |
Reviewed By: amanda On: July 05, 2003 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Although I have to admit I don't really care for rin/sess. But I can't wait to read more inu/kag! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 17:02 CDT
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Lost empire... I wonder what happened. I wonder whether Inu ever lived in Japan, or whether he was born in Montana.
But I like the take on Rin, an old-fashioned woman but just a little out of place in this time. She always seemed so energetic as a kid. The telling of Sess' past, Inutaisho's favoritism... Sesshoumaru's choices all make sense when put in this perspective.
The lemon is touching. We have so many stories about people just getting together, and it's warming to see some of the closeness that comes from knowing each other for a long time.
Is this meant to be a foil for something? Rin knows very well what's going on and for all Sess' other characteristics, their time together is harmonious, but Kagome has no idea. Now that I've got some idea what the Marking is supposed to be, I wonder how she'll react. |
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is like, so cool! When are Yash and Kag gonna be on? Man, I am so excited! |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 28, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked this chapter a lot! Always happy to see you update! ^_^ Can't wait for the lemon chapter and keep up the great work! I wonder why she can't use the soap...
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 21:04 CDT
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The Asshole is about to become her Asshole-in-Law.
I wonder what of the soap... And I wonder why Sess thinks that this has something to do with a reason why Inuyasha would prefer Tennseiga. Something is a danger to her -- I hope she swats his stubborn hide until he spills. |
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