| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: amanda On: July 05, 2003 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Although I have to admit I don't really care for rin/sess. But I can't wait to read more inu/kag! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 17:02 CDT
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Lost empire... I wonder what happened. I wonder whether Inu ever lived in Japan, or whether he was born in Montana.
But I like the take on Rin, an old-fashioned woman but just a little out of place in this time. She always seemed so energetic as a kid. The telling of Sess' past, Inutaisho's favoritism... Sesshoumaru's choices all make sense when put in this perspective.
The lemon is touching. We have so many stories about people just getting together, and it's warming to see some of the closeness that comes from knowing each other for a long time.
Is this meant to be a foil for something? Rin knows very well what's going on and for all Sess' other characteristics, their time together is harmonious, but Kagome has no idea. Now that I've got some idea what the Marking is supposed to be, I wonder how she'll react. |
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is like, so cool! When are Yash and Kag gonna be on? Man, I am so excited! |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 28, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked this chapter a lot! Always happy to see you update! ^_^ Can't wait for the lemon chapter and keep up the great work! I wonder why she can't use the soap...
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 21:04 CDT
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The Asshole is about to become her Asshole-in-Law.
I wonder what of the soap... And I wonder why Sess thinks that this has something to do with a reason why Inuyasha would prefer Tennseiga. Something is a danger to her -- I hope she swats his stubborn hide until he spills. |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you rock! chapter six totally rocked, and the dialogue between Yash and the Artist...nice.
update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jess On: June 27, 2003 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chp! Can't wait to read how does he preform the Marking and why would it be harmful to them in a way! (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun dun duuuuun! And here I thought it wasn't going to have this kind of plot!
What could Sesshoumaru have to gain by offering him Tennseiga? (I can see why such an offer woulkd upset Rin.) Is it a test of his loyalty ot their father? |
Reviewed By: Jenny On: June 23, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was a very good fanfic and I hope there is more to the story soon. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 22, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Very well written! Only complaint I got is not enough fluff between Inu/Kag! Otherwise, really good chapter! ^_^
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 21, 2003 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very pleased with this story and I look foward to see where you are going to take the readers(us)next. I also dig this suave Inu Yasha. I can honestly say that I am truly intriged by this twist so much that I an going to read part 1 I Have Lemonade, Please. Be lookinh for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 19:41 CDT
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Hmmm...what other jobs could Yash have had...I can think of a couple I would like to see him try;). Great chapter. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 11:50 CDT
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Very little is right; I'm eager to find out what's next! |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 01:22 CDT
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Wow, it's great that you updated so soon! This was another wonderful chapter! I've noticed you like to leave us on a cliff-hanger so please update just as soon next time or I may die of anticipation and you would be out one reviewer(I know, like you care). Hope to hear from you soon anyway. |
Reviewed By: Chelsea On: June 15, 2003 03:41 CDT
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I loved this chapter, and how Sess and Kag don't get along....this oughta be good! If it's possible, try to add more of the lemony goodness we all love!
I'm not a hentai, really! ^_^ |
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