| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: April 15, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: *lying passes out on the floor*
Wufei: She stopped breathing.
Vega: *twitch, twitch*
Wufei: She couldn't handle the cliffhanger.
Vega: *sits up* MORE!!! *falls back over*
Wufei: *blinks* I believe that's pretty clear. |
Reviewed By: Yami girl On: April 15, 2003 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know you are SO lucky that you update this story really fast you know that? Other wise I would have to come through my computer and kill you.
Yami Junko: Please forgive my hikari. She has had to much sugar today ^_^
I HAVE NOT! Any way Awsome story! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fire: Great chappie!
Yana: Yeah but poor little Yugi! *hugs her brother*
Yeira:My poor Yami!!! * Hold Yami tight*
Fire:I thought it was GREAT!! Even though Yeira kinda had a major breakdown, she's fine now! THANKS YAMI!!!
Yami: You're welcome!
Yeira: Sorry about that Fire! Is your head ok?
Fire: Yeah just a bump! THANK GOD!!
Yana:You scared us Yeira!
Yeira: I said I was sorry!
Yami: Leave her alone Yana!
Yana: Fine!
Raine: Well I can't wait to read more!!! I will try to work on the NEXT chappie for A Darkened PAst! Well Bye for now! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: hehehe. Pissed off Ryou. hehehe
Karen: * rolls eyes * The STORY, LD, Focus!
LD: * snickers * yeah that was good... heheheh
Karen: I cannot believe that you are still torturing poor Yugi. geeze, this is seriously disturbed.
LD: Um, I think that is the point, Karen.
Karen: Well I don't care. First are the problems between Jou and Yugi, then Yami and Seto, now just when Yugi and Jou were intimate, you go and give the poor boy amnesia.
LD: Ahh, so we come to the root of the problem. She wants another lemon!
Karen: Be that as it may... this is just becoming depressing.
LD: She doesn't deny it! Hahaha! I will protect YD and DD from the lynch mob because I happen to love a good angst fic!
Karen: Suck up. You want a lemon as much as I do.
LD: * sighs sadly * too true... |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 13, 2003 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah!! No, it's another cliffhanger! ;_;
I knew it! He's inadvertantly after Yami. I can't wait for the next part of the story. I have a few scenarios in my mind, I wonder how it's going to go.... |
Reviewed By: Firey Jazz On: April 12, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is totaly amazing!!!! I love it, and I totaly can't wait for more. Hurry up and write!!!! Please, I beg it of you! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter. Who is Yuugi's father going to attack? He obviously thinks Yami is Yuugi. Please post more soon?! I want to see what evil thing you make happen next. Great job so far! |
Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, Love it, Love it! Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jam ( to family) Dilan ( to friends) On: April 12, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To Hell with the clif-hangers! When is the next up date ging to be!! |
Reviewed By: Panther_Night01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very Good Please, pretty, pretty PLEASE will you update again really really soon? So Yugi father think Yami is yugi right? that part was kinda confusing. had to read it twice before i understood it. So is Yugi's dad gonna knife 'em all, and take Yami?
Panther'sYami: what's with all they questions? Curiosity killed the cat
Panther_Night: satisfaction bought it *smug smile*
Panther'sYami: *fumes silently*
Both: Please update again *begging faces* |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME NEW CHAPPIE DREAMER!! I'm surprised you write all that with only some help from Dragon! LOL! Guess what! I finally have an idea for my next chappie! YAY!
Yana: WOW! Well.... I think I won't be the same anymore after reading that lemon with my little brother in it!
Fire: Well Yana, what I'm going to do to you in my fic. you WILL NEVER be the same!
Yeira: OH I got to read this! HEHE! Oh and thanks for geeting MY brother out of the house! Now maybe he won't give me a headache anymore!
Yana: I know something you don't know.....
Fire: SHUT UP YANA!!! Sorry about that Dreammer. She has been ranting that ALL day! She's starting to give me a major headache! DRAGON I GIVE YOU FULL PERMISSION TO SHUT HER UP!!! YOU CAN EVEN GET BAKURA TO HELP!! HEHE!
Yana: NOT FUNNY FIRE!! Just you wait! I'll get back at you!
Yeira: Keep dreaming Yana!
~Well great chappie! I loved it as usual. Yeira is doing fine now. *talking about the e-mail* But I don't think we should worry about Yeira....it's Yana who we should worry about! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Nita On: April 12, 2003 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why you got a nine you may ask? BECAUSE O FTHE CLIFTHANGERS!!!!!
You're Yami's are evil. Mine is kind are...Ale why are you laughing at me?
Alenned: -keeps laughing-= I an't belive you just referred to me as kind. Whne was the last time you wrote something that wasn't angst?
Uhhh, what about the sunshine, no,hey what about that, no not that i, uhhh, SHUT UP!
Alennen: -snickers- I must be one of the only male Yami's stuck with a girl as wacked out as this one.
-sticks out tougue- Baka.
We'll anyways, you guys were really good.But hurry up and write some more!!!! Your clifties are Evil. |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: April 12, 2003 05:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you put up the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: April 12, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, what a horrible place to end your chapter!!! *fumes indignantly* I wanna know what happens NOW! lol Man, Seto's really going to flip if Yugi's dad knifes his friends and runs off with Yami... I love this fic, and I'm already dying for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: April 11, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAH! What's gunna happen? O_O I hate cliffies! WE ALL DO! WAAAAH!
ooo
Philosiphies?
Here, I've got one:
"Man who pick arse have smelly finger after"
Gah!
Evil psycho father! |
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