| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh why you leave us there. waaaaaa. update soon.
Ka sighs she at again. JM stop over doing it on the review.
make a face at Ka. It was another great chapter. ^_________^ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: *grinning wide* Yay! I LOVE YOU! Not the kitchen counter but...
Karen: LD, stop it! oooooh, that ending is kinda scary. Not that his hikari's psychopathic father should be able to stop Yami, but then he is not at the top of his game...
LD: I think you worry too much.
Karen: Hmmm, maybe so, but I think this constitutes one of those times when it is ok to worry. This is a very precarious situation.
LD: I hope Bakura gets to knock out Yami. I mean, there is no way the Pharaoh is going to go into the Kaiba building voluntarily. Muahahaha. *Ahem* Please update again soon! We just love this story. |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep it up!
:)gralnak |
Reviewed By: Amiasha Ruri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool! I usually don't like lemons, but these are very good, and the whole plot of the story is very suspensful as well. Yuugi's father think's Yami is Yuugi? Well... That's unfortunate for Yami. ^_^' Anyway, I love the storyu, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't keep us in suspense! |
Reviewed By: card_captor_sakura1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 08:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
poor seto. i dont kno y im saying that. anywho, PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: niff On: April 07, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woow, that was sad, poor Yugi . . . |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad it was longer! When is Yuugi's dad going to make his move? Are Seto and Yami going to get together? I hope you post more soon! Great job so far! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: April 07, 2003 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* poor Yami....He needs a hug...but not from Anzu. These little bishies need our love...aww.... |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww... poor Yami. Poor seto. Poor Ryou. Poor everyone *sniff* |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: Hehe SETO and YAMI CRYING!
Karen: And Yugi and Joey practically having sex in the kitchen. Maybe they could get back to that at some point...
LD: You are sick.
Karen: Well, it really isn't that big a deal as long as they clean up after themselves.
LD: You are sick.
Karen: Humph. Anyway, this chappie had a little bit of everything. Humor, romance, angst, drama... it's a genre-paloza!
LD: Dear Ra... Please update again before she goes completely insane... |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! IT TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH!! LOL!
Yana: You can't blame her Fire. She was busy. *laughs*
Fire: Oh ok. I guess you were pretty busy! LOL! *laughs*
Yeira: My poor Yami! *hugs her brother* It'll be ok!
Fire: He's the mighty Pharaoh! He'll be fine!
Yana: Yeah! If Yugi can fiace his troubles then Yami can too!
GREAT NEW CHAPPIE!! Poor Bakura though I bet he really wanted to kill me! O well Bakura...THAT"S LIFE!!!! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool writing! I hope to see more of this soon. *winks*
KK =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Nagareboshi On: April 05, 2003 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great Fic, but please update soon!!! I expect that Seto has gone through something similar to what Yugi went through and has never told anyone. I can't wait to see what happens!!
Update ASAP!!! Please!!
Stellacadente |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 05, 2003 12:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah coffee. Tomb Raiders need their coffee in the morning. XD
I was waiting for Seto to say/do something like that. I'm also curious as if this 'stranger' is going to take Yami instead of Yugi... that'd be interesting.
I can't wait for the next parts of your story! It's written wonderfully well so far, keep up the good work! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 11:13 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.....I didn't see that coming at all....
:)gralnak |
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