| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: lastdj7701 On: April 04, 2003 22:26 CST
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Hey! I'm not usually a fan of this kind of fic, but I really like your story. And thank the gods Seto finally cracked Yami one, I would have too. Not that I condone violence or anything... ;) Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Fever On: April 04, 2003 22:24 CST
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Holy crap that was good!! You better write more, I want to find out what's up with... well you know.... |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: April 04, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=^^= Excellent fic, great plot, and your style of writing is magnificent.
Poor Yuugi, and alas (referring to chapter 6) poor Yami... |
Reviewed By: MJ On: April 04, 2003 09:55 CST
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YOu can't blame your inablity to multi task on me!!
First you slam me and then you want me to reivew your work!
*pout* fine
I like where you hit Yami....the little over done hedgehog....he he he |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 On: April 03, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! GREAT NEW CHAPPI! (like always!)
Yeira:*holds Yami* My poor brother! How could you make Seto hit him! You're so evil!
Yana:I have to agree with Yami! I'm going to KILL Joey!!!
Fire: Oh great! Here we go AGAIN!! Poor Yugi how can he live with her!? Well she is HIS sister.
Well, I still think it was GREAT! Yana STILL wants to know when the next chappie is going to come out! And MY FANFIC IS FINALLY DONE! It's called A Darkened Past! So have fun reading it, Dragon! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMON!!!!!!!!!!I'm glad you took my pillow idea. That worked out micely. I love the "baby" touch. Nicely done |
Reviewed By: yamisgirl On: April 03, 2003 08:45 CST
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HE HIT HIM?! SETO HIT MY YAMI?!?! *cuddles Yami* WHAT IS HE THINKING?!?!? Heehee, keep up the good work. Com'on what happens next???? |
Reviewed By: Arwynn On: April 02, 2003 23:52 CST
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Wadda ya mean "status: completed"? COMPLETED?!?! That's not complete!! You left an evil cliffie, dang it!
Love the story, babe. I'm a hikari/yami type person, but I still wanted to read this. You just keep on doin' your thang, 'cause you're d*** good at it! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 20:19 CST
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I liked that chapter. It was pretty good. I hope you post another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:54 CST
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Karen: awww, that was too sweet!
LD: And Seto bitch slapped Yami!
Karen: You are heartless. There was a tender Joey/ Yugi moment and you mar it with your sick sense of humor.
LD: I like what I like. I also liked that ominous figure who is going to try to get Yugi back. Yay for scary villians!
Karen: Just as long as there are more lovey-dovey scenes. I love cuddling!
LD: *Rolls eyes at alter ego* Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 16:03 CST
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just had to add that part of how cool I think your idea of "the mysterious shadow person" (who I think everyone knows who it is) is mistaking Yami for Yugi. Great Idea maybe we will be seeing a mind crush or a penalty game in a future chapter huh? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I shall scream, hold my breath, throw every imaginable temper tantrum I can think of, invent a few new ones, then mercilisly beat my muse into the ground if you do not update this fic NOW!
Cody's Muse - 'O_o! What do I have to do with any of this? You are the one who's desperate!
I swore off threatning the Authors so you are my new "stress releaving test dummy"
Cody's Muse - I'm not gonna be a test dummy, I'm a muse! It isn't in my job description! Not that you care but you wouldn't have been able to write Half of your stuff without my help! Find someone else to beat up on your wild writers tangents.
Be that way. Anyway, I love your fic, keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 17:40 CST
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I feel really sorry for Yuugi! Post another chapter soon! I want to see what happens to him next! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story. update. update.update. is hit by her sharacter Ka. "they get the idea" he grumble. "ooo hehe. sorry" Smile sweetly. can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: March 29, 2003 17:51 CST
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o.o Wow. I can't wait for the next parts. It's written well. And I haven't seen a fic quite like it. Angsty! (love the angst)
Is Seto going to tell Yami about his own similar past? The person lurking in shadows... ooo... evil! |
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