| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: jupiter_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
This is so cool. It's different though. Al through the Yu-gi-oh series,I've never seen any of the characters in this much conflict. GOOD JOB!
But I felt sorry for Joey -although that part of the fic was funny- when he was recovering from seeing Seto kiss Yami, and PLUS earlier that day,he saw Tristan and Otogi together!
In my own opinion,I think you did really good! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey
GREAT NEW CHAPTER!! (as usual) LOL!
Yana:*Crying* Yugi.*hugs Yugi tight*
Yeira: Poor Yana she still can't face what happened to you, Yugi.
Yugi: I know but she's my older sister and it's her job to protect me and worry about me. I love her for that. *hugs Yana back*
Yeira: I still think my brother has it bad!
Yana and Yugi: YEIRA!!!
Yeira: sorry!
LOL! Keep writting my friend it's GREAT! CAN"T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! ;) |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Awww, poor yugi! *siffs*
LD: emotional. This story is getting really good! Sensitive Bakura is good. It seems like Seto is trying to be like an older brother to Yugi while Yami is being a mother hen. hehe *pictures Yami looking like a chicken* hehe, chicken Yami!
Karen: that is a little off topic. Joey is so sweet. I love how you use the endearments. They seem so natural. When I try to write them, it sounds phoney.
LD: When I try to write them, you mean!
Karen: Whatever, the point is, it is good.
LD: Yeah, Update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's Raine! Like I said before GREAT FANFIC! LOL! I hope you got my e-mail! And I finally think I'll write my fanfic! YAY! HEHE.
Yana: I still can't believe my poor little Yugi is shattered. HOW COULD THIS HAVE HAPPENED?!
Yeira:O shut up Yana! It's not your fault....
Yugi:Yeah Yana. It's NOT your fault!
Yeira:It's no use she always blames herself.
Yana:But....what about....
Yeira:YANA! SHUT UP! I'm trying to sleep here! *zzzzzzzzz*
HEHE! Well talk to you later. BYE!! |
Reviewed By: CrazyYami On: March 29, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to keep writing this! I'll come back to check if you do. I must know what's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hyperventalates* must...wait... |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WE LOVE DRAGONDREAMER!!!!! AND YAMI DRAGON!!! YEAH FRIENDSHIP! |
Reviewed By: lastdj7701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Awsome story...I really want to know what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: KraZOtaku On: March 23, 2003 18:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story!!! Please continue writing it! I need to know what happens!! PLEASE |
Reviewed By: ChaosEnd [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! Update soon, damnit. This is really good, please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Crystal On: March 23, 2003 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style of writing, and the grammar is preet good, but I've seen bett, no offence to you. I really like the idea of this story. I think it's the best thing going for you on this fic. Keep writing and put out the next chapter soon, please? |
Reviewed By: moonymonster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Niiiice, could add a bit more in the lemon but that's what happens when you let yamis write them right? *snicker*
Mokuba: O_O
Marisa: I TOLD you not to read it, kiddo...
Mokuba: O____O
Marisa: *sigh*
Moony Rating: 10
VERY GOOD JOB!! KEEP IT UP!!! |
Reviewed By: yamisgirl On: March 22, 2003 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG this is SOOO good. Comon comon what happends next!!! Even though I can maybe guess but I won't!!! poor yugi :grabs him into a hug: |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT A PLACE TO END IT!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!
Yami Junko: Aibou! will you calm down!
I CAN'T CALM DOWN!! DID YOU SEE WHERE IT ENDED!!!
Yami Junko: Yes I saw, and it's no big deal. It will be updated so calm down NOW!
*pouts* fine...But this is an AWSOME fic ^_^
Yami Junko: Please forgiver her, she had to much suger today. |
Reviewed By: kaco On: March 22, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic the whole Yugi getting abused by his father thing though i've seen quite alot before so that's why the overall rating isn't higher. I really like this though and i hope you update this soon |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeira: My poor brother! (talking about Yami)He's caught up in the middle of things!
Yana: Your brother! What about MY brother!? (talking about Yugi)He's the one with the horrible past! O Yugi, my little brother..... please be all right!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!! IT WAS GREAT!!
(These are characters from a fanfic of mine. when I write it you all should read it.Please.) |
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