| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaky. Poor Yugi-kun |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Freaky, but in an intriguing way. In other words, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It is getting really good! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
"My Yami made me do it" is not a suitable excuse. It was good. A little predictable but very well written. More soon. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I hope you post another chapter soon! Poor Yuugi! He was so abused when he was little! I hope he can get over it! Post soon?!! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!
can't wait for more!
I can't wait to find out what is going on!
I'm sure those are more than just normal scares!
:)GRALNAK
Undying Light ch.8 coming soon:) |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughs* poor Yami . . . Locked up like that! Hope you continue soon dude! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holds up sign chanting * LEMON! LEMON!HORRAY FOR DRAGONDREAMER! DOWN WITH ANZU! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 09:16 CST
Comment/Review:
oh, that is so mean, leaving Yami cuffed to the bed. although... um, never mind.
Awesome story. I hope everything works out between Joey and Yugi.
Please keep updating! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 09:12 CST
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. So, when are you going to get the part about why Yuugi wears the collar is so scared when Joey touches him? |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great!keep it up!
can't wait for more!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! It's so original, and I can't wait to see what will happen next! It's very different, yet believeable. You have a lucid writing style and an interesting ability to characterize the emotions of the moment.
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O Yugi dont even no wats wrong?! Plz write more |
Reviewed By: Tipola [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 06:10 CST
Comment/Review:
write more please!!!
Very very good! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 03:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Woohoo love you (not literally) Love this fic!!!! NOW CONTINUE OR ELSE OK LOVE YOU BYE BYE!!! *zips of to class knowing she'll be late* |
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