| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am looking forward to the next chap. I love your writing.
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Title: qustion
Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 19:42 CST
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is there any more.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: November 06, 2008 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been almost 3 years since you updated D:, and also hope that u dont stop there. this is one of the best stories on this site XD, it's very well done. and i hope that u are well and nothing has happened to u. but i beg of u please update as soon as possible. Please please please.
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Reviewed By: yeeeee On: July 15, 2008 21:28 CDT
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really hope you just wont end this here ;_; it's been sooo long since last update. im in love with this story and hope youd post a new chapter soon!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read how the ritual is done and what happens afterwards.
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Title: Great Story...
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 16:09 CDT
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I love this story! I hope you finish it soon. I spent all day reading it and was SO disappointed when there wasn't an ending.
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Title: Better the second time!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 08:51 CST
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I don't remember if I've left a review for you or not; if this is a repeat just consider me ditzy. I read this in your original posting and liked the story then. Though there are still a few minor errors you have added depth and improved the grammar and flow. I know how the story ends, but I'm still hoping that you post the ending soon! I want to see how you've tweaked it. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: December 26, 2006 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooooooo!!! you can't end it there! (end of ch 17) *whimpers* PLEASE! *tries not to cry* sorry i'm better now. your story kicks ass! i'm really bad at writting reviews, but i just wanted to drop u a line and tell you i really like it.. but don't like u bc u left me hanging (ok i do like you.. i just want you to write another ch) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 16:49 CST
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That was great! I hope you get a chance to update soon! I can't wait to see how this all ends.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so beautifully written that I didn't even realize I was at the last chapter until I went to click on the non-exitant next chapter link. You have to update as soon as possible. I thought the first version of this story was wonderful but you're out doing yourself.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 13:37 CST
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I absolutely loved this chapter. I love the tenderness and love that is just flowing off them in waves. I can't wait for the next update!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 08:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha's so cute! I love it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't remember if I've ever reviewed this fic before, but it's been bookmarked as one of my favorites for a long time, so I hope I had the courtesy of letting you know how much I like the story. It's so wonderful to see a new chapter of this! And such a great chapter, too! I particularly liked the conversation about Kagome being afraid, but Inuyasha being afraid, too. And of course Inuyasha's roundabout declaration of love. I'm looking forward to the next chapter with bated breath.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: December 13, 2006 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a beautiful and emotional chapter. I was very happy to see this chapter. I had been afraid that this story had been shelved for good. It was actually in the top ten of a long list of many good stories that I check on a monthly basis. You have done a fantastic job. It would be so wonderful, if I could put this on my small list of great but finished stories. I will keep my fingers crossed. You have great talent, I think. Cynbad146, an avid reader
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Reviewed By: Faye V On: December 13, 2006 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I like the re-do so far. Glad you updated! =^_^= Alice
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