| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dyna On: June 11, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this looks like a fun, angsty ride. Looking forward to reading more about Duo and Heero's unusual situation. Poor Duo, suffering and enjoying at the same time. |
Reviewed By: morgaine_darkwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 05:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Again, you hit us with an interesting story. The plot looks really promising, even if I am willing to bet that things will not be as simple as Dou is expecting |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 01:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waaaaaaiii,...*clap,clap*...NNeeeww CCChhaaaaapppptterrrrrrsssss,.........poor heero,...poor duo,...*giggles*....i wonder how duo gona solve this mess Neee????...and will heero ever gona get his memories back????...continue soon Plllleeeaasseeee????....^.^ |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor heero,....will he gets his memories back soon????....continue soon kay,...*grins*,,,,can't wait for your next chapter,....till then,..Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaannnbbbaattteeeeeeeeeeeeee-Neeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWooooaaaahhhhhh,..i totaly Loooovvveee this fic,...keep-up the good work kay,...and continue soon,...till next chapter,..Jaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaaannnbbaaattttttteeeeeee-Neeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:50 CDT
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hmm Duo keeps trying to call Odin Heero ne? hmm very interesting i love angsty Hee-chan |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, as usual. I just read chapters 15-25 in one big chunk, and I'm glad I had the opportunity to do that, because if I had had to read each of those chapters one at a time per each day, I probably would have died from the suspense.
I enjoyed how you wrote specific parts of the escape from both Duo and Heero's points of view. That offered a lot of insight into what each character was thinking in response to the other's actions. However, I was frustrated by all the thinking that Heero did while he was looking for Duo. To me, it seemed to hinder a lot of the action. At one point I thought to myself, "Oh GOD, Heero, STOP THINKING, RESCUE everyone and get OUT of there already!" Still, it was good for clarification purposes and all that.
I think you're doing a really wonderful job on this story. I personally think long multi-chapter stories are difficult to write, but you pull it off easily. This fic and "Life With Heero" are turning out beautifully.
Keep up the sexcellent work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 06, 2003 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens..I'm sort of wondering how Duo will handle it when/if Heero tells him that he viewed the tapes. To kill or not to kill, that would be the question. *snickers* Ah, I'm having fun. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 07, 2003 16:53 CDT
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It'll work. o_o;; He may not know that, but hey like Fei said, it's better to get it all out in the open than to pretend like it never happened. >.>;;
*is being annoyed by the back door opening and shutting..a lot...* >. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 06, 2003 16:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
D'oh! Heero doesn't even mean to make things bad and he does *goes chibi and windmills arms* Man are those two having problems.
*snorts* Can we say "understatement". *sighs and smacks them both upside the head* Get it together!!! |
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