| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Duo's struggle with his feelings for the "real" Heero, and this "new" Heero, permeates all the chapters with his POV.
I thought the parallel he drew between his current situation and Catherine's (with Trowa) was nicely worked in. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, Duo has to be right. By now, they must be on to who he and Heero really are.
I love the Heero POV chapters, as his confusion is simply adorable and innocent. The flash of memory - of how Duo was dressed in the past - was actually rather poignant. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow and I mean wow this a great story I hope you update soon I would like to read more!!!I really hope it becomes an 1x2 |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'll settle for the rather hackneyed response of: KEEP GOING! ;-) I wanna know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: June 30, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know this much Heero angst is just shocking. I hope that he gets to know everything soon, cause
I want him and Duo to be happy cause they deserve it! Update soon pretty please!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. Update Winning Duo soon please, I want to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: paxnirvana On: June 30, 2003 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is highly enjoyable! The amnesia twist is one of the oldest romance twists around... but you're giving it a fresh new take by having Duo struggle so against his own inclinations. Heero's drastic 'change' is a nice way to illustrate that he is human underneath after all. OOC is a given with amnesia, perhaps. But I really, really enjoy a smart!Duo like this one instead of just smartass!Duo. Great work. I'm very much enjoying this fic and will eagerly watch for more parts. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: June 30, 2003 03:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have to say that my only criticism is that your chapters are too short. We want more! Excellent story, by the way. |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
eep dont leave it there!!!
NOOOOO MUST KNOW MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA SORE BOTTOM HEE-CHAN FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: June 29, 2003 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Heero! Doesn't remember a thing and think that him and Duo are married!! *sigh* Mass confusion! Usually that amuses me...I'm being sympathetic O__o;;;;
I'm more amused by Duo's part >.>;; In love with Heero, *has* Heero in a way (sort of, kind of) and can't do anything about it >:3 Evil! XD *gives you pocky of choice..and her favorite snack* |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm...an interesting predicament. I really like Duo's moral struggles with how to respond - or NOT respond - to Heero's affections.
What will be interesting is when Heero does regain his memory, and what he'll think of the journal he wrote while suffering from amnesia.
The party should be interesting as well. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: June 26, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo. He is being so angsty right now and I can't blame him. Heero is a swwetheart when he is nice like that, but...he isn't Heero!!! I hope he gets his memory back soon and they talk this whole thing out, don't let there be a sad ending, I hate sad endings and...*thinks of a good threat* I will give you a very bad review at the end if you don't make it a happy ending, also though if it is a fairytale ending, I will post one of the best reviews ever, praising your god-like writing skills. Please update this and Winning Duo REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!
Love ya lots and lots,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Airen On: June 22, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww yeah...Heero angst. Gotta love it. And like Zefyr said, this is a stereotype with a little something extra to turn it into a potentially great fic. I'm very amused by Duo's response to Heero thinking they really are married. Poor Duo...stuck between a rock and a hard place, and yet really enjoying it. ::grin::
Keep it up, I'm enjoying this muchly. |
Reviewed By: Zefyr On: June 18, 2003 02:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was going to say, oh, amnesia, wah. And then I started reading and found myself thinking, no, this isn't hackneyed. This is an interesting twist on things - not to mention well-written so far.
Do keep going! |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh i wanna know more about this hotel thing
and what are the fei and sally's reaction gonna be when they come and find out heero lost his memories and will heero still like duo with his memories AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH too many question please update soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has got a very good plot and a very good flow...there is no choppiness to the transition between characters and is well thought out. I look forward to reading more! |
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