| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yira On: July 23, 2003 15:31 CDT
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People need to knock some sense intot he both of them. ;0; Lock them both in a closet for a day or two..or something.
No, Duo could pick the lock and if that failed, then Heero could just break the door down O_o;;; Um...yeah...they need sense knocked into them. *nod*
I want him to rescue them already!! *is all strung out on suspense* You like dragging your readers along, don't you? *poke* You're evil. I like that >:3 |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Know, I don't have to review each chapter... But I like to encourage you to continue and to let you know your doing a great job and that I love this story... |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! You need to write more really soon
cause I want all of them to end up happily! Please, Sally and Wuffers and Duo and Heero need to get together. (In their respective couples of course.) Please let this story have a happy ending, I don't want this to end up being a death fic cause it is too nice and after all this angst they deserve some of the damn happiness! Write again soon.
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 09:10 CDT
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What a great chapter! I really LOVED seeing Heero's perception of the relationship he had with Duo before this mission. The two of them were really both loving and hating the pretense of being married, and since we saw Duo's POV on it earlier, it was so rewarding to see Heero's now.
I think the part where Heero reflects that Duo knew at which point Heero started to rebuff him was an excellent way to show the irony of the situation - both then and now. |
Reviewed By: shy_writer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, I love this fic, but where's the rest of it? *pout with puppy-dog-eyes* Update please? This fic's sooooo good! *waits for next chapter* I can barely wait!!! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 23, 2003 01:13 CDT
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Damn, you're on fire!! I take it that you're getting a lot of inspiration for this story.
I feel sorry for Duo somewhat. Blah, surely he'll realize that feelings like that can't just..appear, right? O_o I don't think you can fake love..Someone needs to tell him that. *nods*
^_^ I hope you can get the next part out as soon as you have been. If not, that's fine. n.n It's a good story. I can wait to read it XD It's worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good place to go for updates on all of
Calic0cat's Gundam Wing Fanfics it is her live journal http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=calic0cat http://calic0cat.freeservers.com/
you will love it I know I do so go check it out... |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the fast update, I just love this story and I will keep reading all the storys you write....... |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There was nothing of what was going on with Duo in the story. What's happening to him, is he dying? Is he all right but resting? Please update really soon you know I can't wait until you
do. I really love this story.
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair
P.S. It will have a happy ending, right? |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 04:18 CDT
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moo....You are so *killing* me here! You rock at cliff-hangers...unfortunately or fortunately? eh he...Anyway, all your stories are interesting and captivating, and this one is no exception. Serioulsy...you need to hurry up with the next update though! Argh! Though you might be cruel and mean and wait a couple days because of the double-chapter goodness we were treated to today...v.v *sigh* Keep going!
^The Firefaery^ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter ... your the best keep going ^_~ I like it Thanks for the fast update... |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 00:55 CDT
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Two chapters in one day! You totally rock (and you inspired me)! I am sooooo enjoying this story... |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo. He got shot by his Hee-baby. I want you to patch this up right away cause I don't like to see the babies unhappy. They don't deserve it in any way. Please write again soon I absolutly love how you are updating every day now!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again another great chapter ... I look rorward to reading and will look for your next update |
Reviewed By: PlaidDragon On: July 21, 2003 16:25 CDT
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Calic0, this better work out or I'll have to crawl down the phone lines and hurt you.
Have some chocolate. LOTS of chocolate...
PD |
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