| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aria On: June 26, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo. He is being so angsty right now and I can't blame him. Heero is a swwetheart when he is nice like that, but...he isn't Heero!!! I hope he gets his memory back soon and they talk this whole thing out, don't let there be a sad ending, I hate sad endings and...*thinks of a good threat* I will give you a very bad review at the end if you don't make it a happy ending, also though if it is a fairytale ending, I will post one of the best reviews ever, praising your god-like writing skills. Please update this and Winning Duo REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!
Love ya lots and lots,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Airen On: June 22, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww yeah...Heero angst. Gotta love it. And like Zefyr said, this is a stereotype with a little something extra to turn it into a potentially great fic. I'm very amused by Duo's response to Heero thinking they really are married. Poor Duo...stuck between a rock and a hard place, and yet really enjoying it. ::grin::
Keep it up, I'm enjoying this muchly. |
Reviewed By: Zefyr On: June 18, 2003 02:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was going to say, oh, amnesia, wah. And then I started reading and found myself thinking, no, this isn't hackneyed. This is an interesting twist on things - not to mention well-written so far.
Do keep going! |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh i wanna know more about this hotel thing
and what are the fei and sally's reaction gonna be when they come and find out heero lost his memories and will heero still like duo with his memories AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH too many question please update soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has got a very good plot and a very good flow...there is no choppiness to the transition between characters and is well thought out. I look forward to reading more! |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: June 11, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this looks like a fun, angsty ride. Looking forward to reading more about Duo and Heero's unusual situation. Poor Duo, suffering and enjoying at the same time. |
Reviewed By: morgaine_darkwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 05:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Again, you hit us with an interesting story. The plot looks really promising, even if I am willing to bet that things will not be as simple as Dou is expecting |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 01:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waaaaaaiii,...*clap,clap*...NNeeeww CCChhaaaaapppptterrrrrrsssss,.........poor heero,...poor duo,...*giggles*....i wonder how duo gona solve this mess Neee????...and will heero ever gona get his memories back????...continue soon Plllleeeaasseeee????....^.^ |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor heero,....will he gets his memories back soon????....continue soon kay,...*grins*,,,,can't wait for your next chapter,....till then,..Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaannnbbbaattteeeeeeeeeeeeee-Neeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWooooaaaahhhhhh,..i totaly Loooovvveee this fic,...keep-up the good work kay,...and continue soon,...till next chapter,..Jaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaaannnbbaaattttttteeeeeee-Neeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm Duo keeps trying to call Odin Heero ne? hmm very interesting i love angsty Hee-chan |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, as usual. I just read chapters 15-25 in one big chunk, and I'm glad I had the opportunity to do that, because if I had had to read each of those chapters one at a time per each day, I probably would have died from the suspense.
I enjoyed how you wrote specific parts of the escape from both Duo and Heero's points of view. That offered a lot of insight into what each character was thinking in response to the other's actions. However, I was frustrated by all the thinking that Heero did while he was looking for Duo. To me, it seemed to hinder a lot of the action. At one point I thought to myself, "Oh GOD, Heero, STOP THINKING, RESCUE everyone and get OUT of there already!" Still, it was good for clarification purposes and all that.
I think you're doing a really wonderful job on this story. I personally think long multi-chapter stories are difficult to write, but you pull it off easily. This fic and "Life With Heero" are turning out beautifully.
Keep up the sexcellent work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 06, 2003 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens..I'm sort of wondering how Duo will handle it when/if Heero tells him that he viewed the tapes. To kill or not to kill, that would be the question. *snickers* Ah, I'm having fun. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 07, 2003 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
It'll work. o_o;; He may not know that, but hey like Fei said, it's better to get it all out in the open than to pretend like it never happened. >.>;;
*is being annoyed by the back door opening and shutting..a lot...* >. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 06, 2003 16:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
D'oh! Heero doesn't even mean to make things bad and he does *goes chibi and windmills arms* Man are those two having problems.
*snorts* Can we say "understatement". *sighs and smacks them both upside the head* Get it together!!! |
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