| "Fragments" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yira On: July 27, 2003 21:23 CDT
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..*Dies of suspense* x.x;;; *munches a cookie, while listening to "Yo Pumpkin Head", though how it's done while dead, she's not sure* Yes, I'm being silly. ^-^;; I don't particularly care. *waves half eaten cookie in the air* Sugar rush, you know...
Blah, I can't repeat enough times "Poor Heero! Poor Duo!!" o_o;; I am a woman of little words x.X I've used most of my discriptive vocabluary in discribing my feelings toward this fic..blah! Previous reviews apply... >.>;; I try you know... |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this story is soooo great I just can't wait until tomoro till the next update you go girl ^_~ keep them coming |
Reviewed By: lissabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 17:05 CDT
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omg. i am just so drawn into this story. i can't wait to see what happens next. please keep the updates coming quickly. ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have time to write much, but poor Duo-chan
he doesn't deserve treatment like that. He really doesn't. He should be able to talk to Heero the minute they comandeer the ship. Please write more soon cause I wanna know what happens!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story Please keep going thanks for the update |
Reviewed By: Turtlefire On: July 26, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great!!! Your stories are so exciting and fluent. Thanks for the frequent updates, I am checking mediaminer at least twice everyday! You have brought so much joy to my life! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 26, 2003 20:08 CDT
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Aww poor Duo! I bet that Heero was scowling because he was feeling guilty though. Hehehe. ^-^ Heero's like that. He can be sweet when he wants >.>;; This fic proves it...even if he didn't have his memory at the time. ^-^;;;
Can't wait for the next one! ^0^ Yosh! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 25, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, More!! I can't wait to read more, so update soon. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW what a great chapter ... This story is soooo great... You keep writing and I'll keep reading
Thanks for the update I look forward to the next chapter...^_~ |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero plays the knight in shinning armor, I like! I can just picture him doing that too, I wonder if that would make a good fanfic.....anywho
please write more again really soon because this story deserves it! Please make it a happy ending though, with no one getting killed, cause I swear if you make this a death fic where any of the main characters die I will stop reading this fic right now! Update soon!!!!!!!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 25, 2003 01:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
*pounce* Yay!!! He saved them!!! *gives you a huge bag of your favorite snack* ^_^!!!!! Happy. Bored as well now. *sniff* There's nothing good to read right now. v.v
Now all they need to do is get to the shuttle...why do I have a feeling that it's going to be somewhat of a hard thing to do? n.n;; Is it your evilness? Or is it just common logic? o.o Cause that would be a first for me. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 24, 2003 21:12 CDT
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;0; Poor Duo. He has no hope!! Heero will show him different, right? He'll rescue them!! ^0^ Right?? *scoots toward you on her knees*
Anyway, it was a real nice chapter. ^-^ Hehehe. Wufei can read Duo like a book! It's cool. XD |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter Please keep them commong |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously love the new chapter. Sally is being kick ass and I love it. Poor Wuffers though, getting hurt when he is just trying to protect his future wife. That is just too sweet. I guess it conflicts with his whole honor thing if he doesn't try. Sadly though, Wufei lives in my head as well as Treize and Zechs and there is the little fact that all three of them are constantly boinking each other he really doesn't appreciate being paired up with her. It's not that he doesn't like her, it's just that she is well....a woman. I am so fucked up. Bye now, write more!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: Sake-chan On: July 24, 2003 00:10 CDT
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Maybe the site's having some sort of problem, but Ch 20 has no words in it. Just thought I'd letcha know, sorry if you already did.
Anyway, I love the story so far (go 1x2), I like the way you handle the first person so that we can still get the POV of both characters. Keep writing :). |
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