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Reviewed By: Jaxmice On: September 25, 2003 21:37 CDT
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Wonderful chapter! I have been following this story for some time and decided I should let you know just how much I am enjoying your spin on the Sess/Kag story line. I am eagerly awaiting your next installment. Well done!
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Reviewed By: Ranmagirl7 On: September 25, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o wow, that part where sess thinks she lives in a well is funny lol. Oh wow, you can't write action sequences?! who noticed (I sure didn't I'll tell you that)I LOVE how your developing then and thier relation ship. And your style is just wow. Anyhoo, GASP!!! o wow does Kagome have the worst timeing or what?! Poor Kagome, poor sesshoumaru too, I hope Kagome belives him. Oh my they're in Kagome's time. I wonder what'll Naraku do. Great chapter and can't wait till the next.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: September 25, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's a lot of violence, but was a little slow. Neverless, congratulations, I like it.
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Reviewed By: RED DAY On: September 25, 2003 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, your last paragraph (or maybe the last 3) has totally confused me. I know Naruku is there and R U saying Sess is too and they (meaning all 3- Kag/Sess/Nar) went down the well together???
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Title: Ooooo!
Reviewed By: Katrina ak Striking Falcon On: September 24, 2003 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Total, wide eyed perfection! There isn't any way this could have been writen better! Shame on Sesshou, but I totally undersand his position! Keep this going! Oh, and you were inspired by that same picture too? I love that one! It's an entire scene in 'You don't Know what You Have...'. Is Beanclam doing anymore drawings? Anywhen, to make a long review short, can't wait for another chapter!
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Title: So happy!
Reviewed By: Youkai Yume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I finally got to read your fic here! I meant to do it a looooooong time ago, but was too lazy...ANyways, I'm so impressed with how everything is going, even better than I thought! You are sooo talented! I also love the way you are portraying Sesshomaru as he struggles to hide his feelings for Kagome, and stay in character at the same time. Now that's an accomplishment! Keep up the fantastical work! ~Yume-chan ^_^
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Title: Yume
Reviewed By: Diva On: September 24, 2003 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I´m reading this fic since the begining on MM. S/K is my favorite pair and your story keeps them in character what is great. I´ve never reviwed this fic before because I don´t feel so comfortable writing in English (I live in Brazil), but I can say that my vocabulary is increasing thanks to your fic. Anyway keep writing, I´m waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: defafaeth_mechqua On: September 24, 2003 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting. take your time on the next chap.
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 24, 2003 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
GAH!!! Will someone kill that baka baboon-loving ass hanyou? Why the hell does he always appear at the right time for a wrong reason? Damn him! Will you make Sess kill him soon? or even better have Kagome purify him to dust! Well enough of me bubling.. love this fic! Hope Sess will have to work hard to gain back Kagome. oh and DON'T LET NARAKU DO ANYTHING TO KAGOME~ PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Whispers On: September 24, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^ Totally not expecting that. It seems as though Sess is no longer in denial of his true feelings. Good for him! He still has some issues, but he is getting better! ^.~ Feel bad for Inu though, but he can't always win, can he now? Can't wait for the next chapter! >.
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Reviewed By: RED HAT On: September 24, 2003 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Rain Of Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai Wai!! ^_^ *runs around room giggling like mad* A new Yume chappy!! *stops running to glomp TT from across the room* ^_^ Hehe! Lolz! Love the part where Sesshou said: "You live in a hole in the ground?" he paused, then clarified, "A wet hole in the ground?" *giggles madly pounding fist on the table, laughter tears running down face* HAHAHA!! And all the seriousness, the anger, the conflict...GREATNESS TT-chan!! ^_^ I was about to yell at the screen when Kago showed up, but my inu taiyoukai here *motions to a slumbering Sesshou, tail curled up around Rain who is laying in the chair with him* needs his 'beauty sleep.' ^_~ *Shippou hops onto Rain's shoulder* Shippou: Actually, she just put him like this to get a picture of them together. I know, cuz i took the picture! *smiles and holds out the picy for TT* Rain: A-heheh...*sweatdrops and snatches the picture away* No i didn't...*blushes and cuddles into Sesshou's tail* Soo kawaii!! ^_^ Anywayz! ^_^ I loved it soooo much!! The conflict gig was fantastic and if you just saw the look on my face when i read how Fluffy's remarks made Kago sad-you'd probably have a hoot! ^_^ Shippou: *holds out more pictures* Actually TT-sama, i have some of those right here too! Rain: *sweatdrops at the eager kit* Lol, well, there you go! ^_^ I love how you let her see that Fluffers was extra concerned when that hunky bad guy Naraku dragged her inside the well...*drools* Lol! ^_^ I'll have to pay my janitor double with Fluffers here in his *drools more* silky *waterfall of drool* black *ocean of drool* boxers...^_^ *snaps out of drool state and turns to Shippou* Shippou, will you do the honors? Shippou: Of course Ame-sama! *smiles and holds out pictures of Sesshou in the spoken attire to TT-chan* Here ya go TT-sama!! Rain: *grins and pats the kit's head* Thank you pup! *turns to TT* Think of it as a reward for the new chappy! ^_^ *winks and holds out Miroku* And don't forget THIS! *wink wink, nudge nudge* ^_^ Welp, till the next chappy!! *huggles* ~Ame
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Title: Fanning the Flames
Reviewed By: Sesshoumarus_Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! *~swoons~* I think I acquired the vapors. My heart stopped beating when Sesshie started goading Inu Yasha. I just knew that Kagome was probably going to show up. *~runs around in an immature circle waving a sports flag w/ Sesshie's name on it~* C'mon, Sesshie, you can kick Naraku's filthy hide! O.o by the way, I love your dialogues (or lack thereof *~winks~*). It's unique and a very advanced way of writing. Please, continue. I'm suspended in suspense! Valeska
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it ^^ Sesshoumaru's thoughts and actions were great...as was the general battle between the two brothers...the taunting, the anger, the feelings... I like that you had Kagome appear in the middle of the fight, but then you were nice enough to allow her to see Sesshoumaru's concern as she was taken away.
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Title: *o*
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: September 23, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even if you did have problems with writing verbal conversations, who could tell..^-^ everything between sesshoumaru and kagome are going so smooth and perfect. and you can't help but be drawn to the way sesshoumaru's charcter is and the whole interaction between the two. i can't resist the urge to...i don't know what yet but...nnn. keep updating and keep on trucking.
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