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Reviewed By: Ikamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing! And might I say I was thrilled when I discovered that the fic had 65 chapters! I am new to the sight so I can't really tell if the stories done or not; if it isin't, I sincerely look forward to more chapters! If it is, then I hope for more stories by you, I'm sure I will enjoy them all. Ps: Long enough for 'ya? ;3
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Reviewed By: carole On: April 21, 2007 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story but...black lips? kinda turns off the beautiful thing no?
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Title: Transformations
Reviewed By: PopTart Margarita On: April 11, 2007 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just LOVE this fanfic. I rarely can read a lot of chs of fanfics but this one..man i wanted to read it in one night (but i didn't because my eyes got tired :P) i found it to have the right mix of everything. I just had surgery on my shoulderr two weeks ago and i found this story just before it and i was SO so pissed about not being able to sit in the chair comfortable long enough to read. You did such a great job on this! I'm sure its going to be one story i'll read many times over. *claps* I look forward to reading other stories written by you!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 22:32 EST
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Can't look for any mistakes entertainment way more than OK just perfect. Love the idea and the originality surrounding it. A+
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Title: Waaaah! ur CRAZY! O.o
Reviewed By: Tohru Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your fanfic's so cool! A BIG well done for you! Tee hee hee *waves a flame thrower around as if it was a tissue* SO HYPER ATM! My fiance is readin the story on his laptop. Eating more skips... Yumyumyummy. ha ha ha
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 23:07 EDT
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OMG I started crying so hard when I thought this was over, I mean like I never cry but I've been staying up late and just reading this now for the past 4 days and I never wanted it to end!! It's the best fic that I have every read in my entire life! The only part that I didn't like about it was that Shippo and Kagome seem to drift apart... but 500 years would do that to you... I'm so sad though because I know that I can't read the other AE because I would be so sad if something happened to Kagome or the pups... any of them.. .I am however really curious as to how long they plan on living?? And with all those youkais and hanyous around, wouldn't modern times be alright with the whole, apearence thing? Anyways sadly I have to go... I wuvvles you for all the work you put into this... Ja ne
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Title: Finished
Reviewed By: Bladecutter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There, finnaly done. Well played out ending. Gatta say though, holy crap at the amount of kids they had. Jeebus. O_o
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Title: Oh yes,
Reviewed By: Bladecutter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 21:37 EDT
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By the way, the hanyou Kagome sounds cute. :3 I always wanted fuzzy dog ears like Inuyasha's... Makes meh sad... Ah well, very descriptive fic. Hope to see you write more, and try not to get deterred by all the untalented pricks who bash authors for every tiny thing they find. Like a typo. Or something. They should just die. Maybe I'll donate a laser of eternal pain to you or something... :) Some parts of this made me wonder though but I can't quite think of them right now... Anyways, I hope you keep writing fics for us adoring bullet-hole filled, charred and beaten fans of yours to read. ;) I bet most of the flamers are just jealous that they lack talent. :o Either that or they think they are above everyone else and flame for no reason other than to get rid of competition. But we all know thats not true. :o Kudos! ...Grrr, Mediaminer is tickin' me off, it keeps givin me this crap about a invalid spam protection code. They can shove thier damn code, all its doing is making it take longer for me to review again... >.
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: Bladecutter2 On: May 17, 2006 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good fic. I tend to read through reviews when I'm done with the fic so I can laugh at all the people bashing the author for being stupid, but I'm not done yet. ;) Loved the lemons by the way. O_o Most descriptive ones I've read. These actually put images in my head. XD
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Title: crush
Reviewed By: aranay On: May 14, 2006 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*blush*I think I have a crush on Kagome's dad. *blush*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is some kick-ass fic! I loved the placement of the lemons. Kagome as a hanyou . . . I'm not so sure about it, but you made it seem so real. Like it really happened, you know? I wish you could've put some more Sango and Miroku romance into it, gives the story more variety and "fling." Again: KICK-ASS FIC RIGHT HERE PPL! IF OTHERS DON'T READ IT, THEY'RE CRAZY!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kotseya1 On: March 20, 2006 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a cool fanfic oh and i thought you'd like to know the mist is called miasma
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Kitty-Katty On: March 09, 2006 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was awesome! I plan to read it all over again, maybe twice more!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Fox_Gurl On: February 26, 2006 18:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Oh, here's more faces. ^_^;;; guilty, looks better when in reg. typing. =^_^= kitty! i love cats. :D :P >_< :) :( ( :) makes a smily face on microsoft word and :( makes a frowny face) ._. $_$ *_* ?_? ~_^ thats all ^_^ ja ne
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Title: omfg!
Reviewed By: Inu/kag forever On: February 20, 2006 17:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. you put alot of work it to this.it rules.i first read it on fan fiction.net. but then i saw it here and thought " why not"..so i read it again.i like the story better here. but thats just because of the lemons.i'm a perv.what can i do.but this story rules.kagome sounds pretty.i can't really see her with blue hair.but w/e.and the hole she can heal her self with her powers is awsome.i loved to read the things you said at the bottom of the chapters.the way you always seemed to try to kill us . thats great. i 'm glad we came back and hurt you to. you always seem to want to fight or something.but you just wanted rev. so it's cool. besides it made me laugh.i was a little up set that you didn't put kouga and ayme together. but thats fine.funny how things happen. :) as for sesshy, why you parded him with kagura i don't know. it should be sesshy and RIN!!!!!...but yeah okay.i went to the wed site that had all your pic's on it of the poeple.i don't care if this is wrong. RARE IS FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!...and as for souta's father.fuck him..i thought you were going to make him like die or something. but mean works. he should die.(*picks up asshole father finding thingy and finds him and kill's him*).Mwhahahahah. yeah thats all i go to say it was a great fan fic and it was even better here. love the pic...Inuyasha and kagome are like rabbits...all though's kids. it's not healthy. good job..oh and yeah i love the lemons! :)
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