| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: there there I'm sure she deserves a good bashing but how long is far too long a bashing?
Reviewed By: wingless_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey..... if I find her she will feel the wrath of moi.... god if any one has ever had to write one of those pesky research papers you would know how punishable plagurism is... when my english class was assinged the project we spent nearly two weeks getting sources and making sure that we got all the info. on the authors and such.... she needs to....ugh... I won't let my imagination run away with me but... I shall vent
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: August 25, 2004 18:10 EDT
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I SHALL GO BITCH RIGHT AWAY!!! LOL That sux! I hate people who can actually live like that. Ya know, how they don't feel guilty at all for their stupid actions? Where's the fun in stealing someone else's great ideas and skills? Stupid people... Hope you enjoy Arizona! I've always wanted to go there. Well, I'm going to rant on her site and tell her how she's horrible and stupid and mean and, uh, stupid. LOL
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Reviewed By: Timeblader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just wondering should i make it public that she stole this story from u? By the way, Great keep it up! I give it full 11's! (guy in the background):You can only go up to ten. Oh! heh, Full tens then
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 13:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me to days to read your story and it FUCKING ROCKS please please update soon
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 00:30 EDT
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Whew!!! 4 looong days to finish this up! Thanks for the fun and imagination!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 13:12 EDT
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update. i need to see some action!! some chops and kicks and stuff. come on man! i wanna see!!
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Reviewed By: Shorty-600 On: July 30, 2004 13:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*twitch*you must*twitch*update!!!If you update soon, i'll give you a lovely little Air Force fighter plane*nodnod*includes missles which are all ways fun to use on unsuspecting people from above..but thats besides the point!!your story is addicting!it'd be cruel to not update,and not in a good way
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Reviewed By: wothless_poet On: July 20, 2004 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that cant be the end! I mean I wanna see Kagome and Inu-Chan FIGHT! I wanna see Hojo do some serious ASS KICKING! I wanna see some battle action! More than just "DIE NOW!" I mean u build us up so much....and than u just DROP US! Not even gently just BAM! and Im on the floor! PLEASE PLEASE ***PLEASE*** ADD SOME MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!
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Title: great ness is a vertue and you have it
Reviewed By: shaggytwin On: July 18, 2004 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story its really fun to read. Its really orignal from most of the stuff i read but you really need to upsate soon or im gonna go @#$kin Insane !!!!!!
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Title: great ness is a vertue and you have it
Reviewed By: shaggytwin On: July 18, 2004 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story its really fun to read. Its really orignal from most of the stuff i read but you really need to upsate soon or im gonna go @#$kin Insane !!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 53
Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took me a while, but I was finally able to read the whole thing. And I must say, great job, I totally loved how you've written the fanfic so far. I hope you update soon, I'd really like to read more, >.< I'm hooked.
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Title: incredible
Reviewed By: nomey On: July 02, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy, and i mean HOLY, shit!!!! that was incrdible, one of, if not, the best story i've ever read, Good job. But plz don't tell me thats the last hapter, its a cliffy in itself, AND I MUST READ MORE, so if your going to, udate more plz.
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Reviewed By: swirly On: July 02, 2004 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not sure that you will get this but here i go anyway. k i'm just going to tell u straight out... i loved ur fanfic... but i thibnk u should have gone on instead of ending it that way. if i were u i would have kept on going after the battle and told the reviewers about what happened to hojo or koga and kagome and inuyasha and sango and miroku. if i could rewrite this whole story i would first of all fixed ur grammer and and put it in better decriptiopn and stuff like that and ad i told u i would have gone on about what happened afterward it would have been a great fanfic if just went on. if i ahd the abilty to re-write it i would all the way this may not seem like the best news to u but it needed to be said and ad u always say reviewers better review. well in my review this is my opinion and i think that u should consider it. please do cause i would so waqnt to re-write it with your permission i'll if u want to e-mail me heres my e-mail spazmnky_920@yahoo.com if u don't get a reply from me it's because my god damn e-mail won't work and won't let me e-mail nebody
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Reviewed By: Leeneko On: July 02, 2004 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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wheeee!!! i just finished reading it all te way through. @.@ -dances with glowy sticks- that twas so great. yep yep -runs around with her own flamethrower from excitment- wheee!!
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: Nomey On: June 29, 2004 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN!!!!! THAT WAS GOOD, Great analagies. I must say you seem to have experience from the great description you put in.
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