| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: When?
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 04:28 EDT
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When are you going to update your fic? I hope you post again soon, I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NOOO
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Reviewed By: inu_shikon On: June 18, 2004 23:44 EDT
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cool story
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:54 EDT
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh evil typos.....!!!!! and i dint mean too post twice... falls down on hands and knees and begs for forgiveness!!!!!
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:53 EDT
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i really do enjoy this fic. the one problem that i have w/ it is that fact that kagome is a metch for inuyasha. that in itself is not bad. its the fact that shes almost a little too mch of a math for him that annoys me. i maen come on i know all us girls like too say that anything a guy can do we can do just as well if not better, but this makes inuyasha look a little bad. this is not a flamer just an opinion. but all in all i simply adore youre ficcy. - milady 17 m8ball@bellsouth.net (if you would like to speak with me:-) )
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:53 EDT
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i really do enjoy this fic. the one problem that i have w/ it is that fact that kagome is a metch for inuyasha. that in itself is not bad. its the fact that shes almost a little too mch of a math for him that annoys me. i maen come on i know all us girls like too say that anything a guy can do we can do just as well if not better, but this makes inuyasha look a little bad. this is not a flamer just an opinion. but all in all i simply adore youre ficcy. - milady 17 m8ball@bellsouth.net (if you would like to speak with me:-) )
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Title: transformations
Reviewed By: goth_inu_girl On: June 15, 2004 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Subject: 53! is kagome really pregnant??? i had a lot of other questions, but i just fell out of my chair and can't remember them anymore. who r u? who am i? where am i? do i know u? maybe if i hit myself again... *falls out of chair again and lays there, twitching every now & then* owww. bad idea. good story. really. i'm not lying. i don't think so anyways. hahaha. j/k. ^_~: winking *_*: stoned person. ha. c u.
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Reviewed By: Ky On: June 06, 2004 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You never cease to amaze me with your writing, but it's been nearly three weeks since your last update. Please start writing again. I'm sure "the final battle part 2" will be awesome. Write faster. Thanx Ky
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Reviewed By: yami_neko On: June 05, 2004 21:36 EDT
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chapter 53 heeheehee i like the faces, now please........... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... UPDATE AND GET TO THE FREAKIN' BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yami_neko On: June 05, 2004 21:08 EDT
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ya know the male tubeie thngs are called vas deferens, see how much useless stuff i learn in school
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Title: 53
Reviewed By: Kettricken On: June 05, 2004 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God oh God oh God. Close to a month and you haven't updated. I just read this entire fic today and if you're not going to write any more of it, I may quite possibly die...or finish it for myself, albeit terribly, and read it over and over obsessively like a crazy person. =7 Your fic is great. Usually I don't like fics that turn Kagome into a youkai or hanyou all that much, but you've done an admirable job. I've tried to stop reading at least a dozen times and I just couldn't. Oh, and your writing is pretty high-quality as well--almost forgot that part. I'm a technicality junkie, and while I did notice some spelling and grammar errors, there weren't nearly as many as most fanfics I've read. Your style draws the reader, also. Your development of minor and original characters is excellent; I like knowing why everyone is acting the way they are. I've really enjoyed your changing perspectives as well, even when they sometimes split a chapter into five or six little bits. Many kudos and cookies to you, and please, pretty please don't abandon this story!
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Reviewed By: yami_neko2 On: June 04, 2004 15:46 EDT
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hey i just noticed thiswhen kagome was telling the story of her father to sango and miroku and kogua, , if inu yahsa could go through the well when he was in demon form(in the beginning of the story when kagome had her period and inu yasha was tryign to mate with her) then how come Rare go through when he was hurt so kagome's mom could help him ghet better and then have kagome? or maye its just a plot hole caused by the grenades *snickers*
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Reviewed By: digger On: June 02, 2004 04:35 EDT
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I've been enjoying your fic. I hope that you update fairly soon. By the way you may have a nuke but, I'll just lob shells the size of volkswagens at you from the Missouri; an Iowa class battle ship with 9 16inch guns. If you attempt to send in the bomber I'll just have one of my escorts intercept you. They are all equiped wth the AEGIS fire control system and have the full balistic missile defense upgrade. Also don't forget one of the stars of operation Desert Storm the Tomahawk cruise missle which is on board every ship in my flotilla
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Title: K...
Reviewed By: Andraya On: May 31, 2004 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! plz update. O and... {Brings out chainsaw and starts running after the author}SO, HOW DO YOU LIKE IT WHEN SOMEONE TRIES TO KILL YOU?!?!?MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
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Title: bringer of death
Reviewed By: lodus On: May 29, 2004 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was for 53 and i loved it so you kneed to update the story ok have a great day where ever you are. here in hawaii live is good with no more finals and summer on its way. I love the originality of your story like how she just happens to have all these things she dident know have a good one and eat some da-kine good grins k see ya
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