| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue_Saiyan_Angel On: November 29, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought something was amiss. I'm glad it's fixed now. I was beginning to think SF's brain was on overload. TTFN!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not logged) On: November 29, 2003 22:40 CST
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oooooh, It makes sense now! *nods* I see I see, no wonder I was a bit confused on that last chappie...
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Reviewed By: (fireash) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i was wondering about that. loved the battle seen. i bet she brushes her teeth till they bleed. well i guess everyone knows the next chapter huh? oh well. thanks for updating. hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, great, wonderful, amazing! o and now it makes sence(you know the mess up w/ the chapters, o and now i understand who katsumi is)!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Rain Of Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 17:25 CST
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Rain:*wipes brow then sighs* Whew! ^^ I thought i was behind in my chapter readings or something last time cuz i was like, Who in the world is Katsumi!!? ^^ Inu: Yeah, the Droplet thought she was losing her mind for a minute there. Sesshou: We called the nut house after she started appearing on news shows randomly asking the world who Katsumi was. *inu cast sweatdrops and shakes their head as Rain blushes* Rain: What?! So i over reacted...no biggie! *knock at the door then-* voice: We're here for Rain of Stars...says here you're to be taken to the nut house. Rain: WHAT!!? *glares at Inu and Sesshou* Sesshou: I told you that we called the nut house. *more knocks at the door* voice: Do we have to come in there or what!? Rain: *panics, running around the room* Uh..N-no!! Uh...one Rain Of Stars, coming up! *grabs Kikyou, tossing her at the door bound in ropes and gags* She's all yours pal! *door opens revealing men in white suits who pick up a struggling Kikyou* voice: Much obliged. *turn to walk away* Inu: H-hey!! That's not Rai--*Sesshou ties and restraints Inu in the blink of an eye* Mmm-hmoph! Hommphrn smooof!! Sesshou: *holding Inu upside down by his feet and tosses him in the back with Kikyou* You don't mind taking him with you too do you? Men in white suits: Why? What's wrong with this one? *nods toward a struggling Inu* Rain: *appears beside Sesshou* Well, you see, this one thinks he's a cat and refuses to take off those Halloween ears. Men in white suits: *winks in understanding* Oh, i get cha! Don't worry, they'll be there for a looooong time! Sesshou/Rain: Keep them as long as you want! *wave goodbye to the truck, Rain cuddling into Sesshou's shoulder* Rain: Awww...just me and you Maru-kun. Sesshou: *grins evily* My plan entirely...*picks up Rain bridal style* Rain: ^^ See ya SF-chan! The chappy was awesome, the action was great, and i love it to bits! Can't wait till next time; and as Kago said; Patience is a virtue! Ja! ^^ *waves goodbye as Sesshou closes a door with a 'Do not disturb' sign*
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 17:19 CST
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who was katsumi again?? which chapter is she from?? yay! u fixed it. it was really confusing. update soon!
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Patience to hell, get your butt over there...sory had to much ice cream...
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not signed in) On: November 29, 2003 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was perfect! I loved how everything went! Ah, you've made my weekend. Now I'll have to wait until next time....AAAAAH! Too long! Hurry!
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Title: Happy
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 15:56 CST
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Now I understand the last chapter! I'll still read it next week, tho. I need to re-read stuff NE ways.
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Title: Something´s missing
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 07:04 CST
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I`m soooo glad they all made it through the fight! But where is it???? Please update soon!Cause I wanna know wht happened between Kag and Naraku! Ja ne kagomesirene
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writin'
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Reviewed By: MarsMarmalade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 14:31 CST
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i really love this story, but what happened in the fight with Naraku? i guessed they won, but did i miss a chapter somewhere? anywho, can up the great writng and please read the story i'm writing with Ladyofthedragons1. if you review it we'll send you cookies... :)
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Reviewed By: shadow kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhhhhhhh..............Thanks for updating but, I think you skipped a chapter.This is really confusing...I love the story but you should look at the last two chapters.They don't seem to be in the right order.Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still giving you a ten on this chappy even though it's a filler. Soon Sess and Kag will meet up again! Yay! And he'll get to see his mommy! But now who knows what's going to happen when the Jewel is complete! Will they have to wait five centuries to be together? I hope not!
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Title: uhhh.....
Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this was a great chapter and all, but we didn't get to see chapter 10. you went strait to 11... soooooo... I think we'd like to get that one... Things are a little confusing as is
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