| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: November 25, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great as always. thanks for updating even if it was a filler. glad we made your cousin happy. neway hope to read more soon. :D
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Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 10:35 CST
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What happened to the battle with Naraku? I think You skipped a chapter. Or else I'm really confused
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Reviewed By: animegirl11 On: November 24, 2003 22:43 CST
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yeah, i know i just reviewed, but i just checked the chapter numbers and you went from chapter 9 to chapter 11, so i think you forgot to post a chapter. just letting you know! sorry, and lol...again.
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Reviewed By: animegirl11 On: November 24, 2003 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, but why didn't you write a chapter about Narakus battle with Kagome and the rest of them? or did i miss something? either way, great fic, and update soon! lol!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not signed in) On: November 24, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: Ah, female bonding time, and playing dress up... CF: what sissys... Yume:*glare* What about YOU? I saw you rummaging through my clothes last time, dancing in front of the mirror, wearing mom's make-up! CF: O_O When did Yume--I mean, CF has no idea what Yume's talking about. Yume: *sarcastically* Right. Anyways, great chapter! And I hope you update soon! Good luck with finals, and ciao! CF: I DID NOT PLAY DRESS UP!
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Reviewed By: Shini Maxwell On: November 19, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plpease please finish itttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuma On: November 19, 2003 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you give a small portion of the next chapter and it turns out you don't have it! :( i love your story. i don't know how long i have waited for this one to come out. so, thank you. your's is and shall remain my fav. story.
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shimatta...that is short...
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Reviewed By: KohakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:53 CST
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Minyao! Yes, it was short, but to the point I guess is what they say! Can't wait for Friday! YAY YAY YAY! *ish bapped by muse and dragged off* Ugh . . .
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Reviewed By: YoukaiYume(not signed in) On: November 17, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: What is there left for me to say? It's all been said before! CF: SF-sama's writing sucks! Now, if you had CF's help, SF-sama would do better in no time!(quickly silenced by a mob of angry fans who sit themselves on her) @_@ Yume: Ahem. Do not listen to this child, she knows nothing. CF: CF knows more than Yume! Yume: (throws a pillow at her) I don't mind the short chappie, seeing as mine aren't getting any longer themselves...My finals are the first week of Dec. too, *sigh* I hate school... CF: Oh! We need to go, Yume-sama, b-day greetings, 'member? Yume: Oh yeah! Update soon, and good luck on them finals! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: November 14, 2003 06:21 CST
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Oh, no! You poor thing, losing all of your data marbles! I sympathyze completely, as it happens quite foten with me. The losing of the marbles, not the lost data. Although I had a story disk corrupted once, but thankfully had a backup. *mutters* Took me a while to find it, though, and I about had a heart attack first. Well, as Alice said, "curiousier and curiouser"! Add treacheray and Naraku into the mix (the two are practically synonymous as it is), and you've got one great line going here!
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi THIS IS SO GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 16:53 CST
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How cruel! I must know what will happen! *threatens SF with...twizzlers?* Hey, it was the closest thing to me!
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 14:11 CST
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That was strange! Talk about seeing double. Seems Sesshou would be happy to have two Kagomes, seeing that he wears a size 12 shoe. ~_^
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 11:56 CST
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O.o Information overload! But yay! *jumps around* Kagome told Sess again how she feels! *pouts* But he must tell her what he thinks! The suspense is killing me!
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