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Title: ch69
Reviewed By: priscel *appears in a wisp of smoke* On: October 18, 2004 20:06 EDT
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WAAAA he proposed!!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 18, 2004 15:50 EDT
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that's gotta be the first time i've ever heard heero even mentioning of leaving duo, even though he says that he wants to marry him. it's good that he brought his fear out in the open, but it was still a surprise. trowa really helped out here, and i can't wait to see wufei come in. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dusty Z. On: October 18, 2004 12:13 EDT
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I was disappointed in reading your snipe about Mormorns in this chapter. Maybe your only exposure to one was at the door, but if you've ever had one as a best friend or neighbor, as I have, then you know that they are some of the best people you can know. They and the JWs go to your door as part of their religion, all you have to do is say your not interested and they respect that. Why do people think so badly of people who are just trying to live a good life? why not turn Duo's surly attitude towards someone who truly deserves it.
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Reviewed By: rw On: October 18, 2004 11:17 EDT
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Don't forget to mention the spectacular hair and nail growth associated w/ the vitamins. That could be a bitch to deal w/.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 09:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fanfic!! Sure it took a while to read all 68 chapters but eh, I was bored! LoL ... awesome fanfic and you really made it believable about Duo having a kid and Heero's protectiveness and all that! But man, boy is Duo moody lol (stupid pregnancy hormones)! Poor Heero doesn't seem to know what to do most of this fic...I can't wait to see the baby when it's born ^-^ it's going to be soooo cute (come on, if you had Heero and Duo for parents you would be a good looking baby too lol) So Can't wait to see what's going to happen next (poor Duo being stuck with the mother hen for the next week) so hope you update soon...not to mention Duo's going to get married to Heero ^-^ Go Heero!!!!!!!!!! ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 14, 2004 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great please update I really, really mean it...
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Duo and Heero are getting married! Great story so far! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: inulover116 On: October 10, 2004 19:58 EDT
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i love the new chap. a lot it was another well done fic on ur part. The ice cream sounds really good(mmmmmmmmmmm)how to read another chap soon.Can something happen to Heero for a little angest on his mission PLZZZZZZZ!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel *grins* On: October 06, 2004 17:57 EDT
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What a nice interlude for the hectic hell with concern for the baby's and Duo's survival. Do they still sell Heath nutty bars in Australia? I tried to find them here in the US and had little success *pouts*.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I love this fic. Lot's of humor and just a little drama now and then, I think it is a perfect balance. I like it that during your story they both change their characters a little. Heero is opening up more emotionally and Duo learns to trust and lean on other people. That is soooo good. Hmm, maybe Duo should start knitting or crocheting to have something to do. hehehe isn't that what mothers do during pregnancy??? lol
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 06, 2004 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where is WuFei is he going to be in this flic some more?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 06, 2004 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was wonderful ..I loved it... Please update again soon..
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Reviewed By: Sakura loves yaoi On: October 02, 2004 02:02 EDT
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i love this story a lot and can't wait until u update soon.I love how Duo finally decided to consider what Heero was feeling.I think that when u write the next chap or two that there should be some angest about heero going on his trip and mabey he gets hurt or something.Well good tiding with the writhing and all. I hope that u write more of the story u have so well built so far...^_^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 01, 2004 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story.I've Enjoyed reading this chapter please update.......
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 25, 2004 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry It took me so long to review,I found your story very well written, you are a talented writer..I thought that this was or is an excellent story. . I am always reading drama or humor stories depending on what mood I'm in and I found this one of the few good one's out there. So I thank you for writing this story for me and everyone else to read.So again please update soon.. NOTE: If you find the same review for more than one chapter of your story, It is because I just go home and read everything in my in box and have done another mass review ...But believe me I mean every word of this review and want to read more of everyone's stories...^_~
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